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To Save a Princess Feedback Thread
Posted: Tue Sep 26, 2023 11:43 am
by Shattered
Part 3 of the Mirror series and the finale! Chastity used at the start, but not required.
To Save a Princess
You don't need to have played any of my other teases to jump right in, but Mirror, Mirror, On the Wall... and Locked Servitude are recommended.
There is a feedback poll at the end, else you can leave any comments or bug reports here - but please check the known bugs, as there are a few I can't fix right now, but at minor. Any major bugs please let me know asap!
Enjoy!
Known Bugs SPOILERS INCLUDED
- Spoiler: show
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Re: To Save a Princess Feedback Thread
Posted: Tue Sep 26, 2023 11:51 pm
by TheAcolyte
I know this is probably not the main thing you're interested in, but in the preview text it says ""Will you survive the interrogation and prove her innocence, or prove pivotal to her acquital?"
Firstly, two t's in acquittal.
Secondly, and more importantly, both of these options mean the same thing. Personally I love the phrasing of "prove pivotal to her acquittal" but it might be too wordy if you put it after "survive the interrogation".
May I suggest "Will you break under the interrogation, or survive and prove pivotal to her acquittal?"
Re: To Save a Princess Feedback Thread
Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2023 11:04 am
by Shattered
TheAcolyte wrote: ↑Tue Sep 26, 2023 11:51 pm
I know this is probably not the main thing you're interested in, but in the preview text it says ""Will you survive the interrogation and prove her innocence, or prove pivotal to her acquital?"
Firstly, two t's in acquittal.
Secondly, and more importantly, both of these options mean the same thing. Personally I love the phrasing of "prove pivotal to her acquittal" but it might be too wordy if you put it after "survive the interrogation".
May I suggest "Will you break under the interrogation, or survive and prove pivotal to her acquittal?"
Well I've learned I didn't know what that word meant today
Thanks. Reworded.
Re: To Save a Princess Feedback Thread
Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2023 12:22 am
by LobsterFate
As normal incredible tease. Nipple play for me is unbearable pain so it was so hard not to give in. Always love your story teases!
Re: To Save a Princess Feedback Thread
Posted: Sat Sep 30, 2023 1:20 pm
by killer1243
Got stuck on "Domina failure, confession good, time to tie up and leave"
Re: To Save a Princess Feedback Thread
Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2023 11:10 am
by Shattered
killer1243 wrote: ↑Sat Sep 30, 2023 1:20 pm
Got stuck on "Domina failure, confession good, time to tie up and leave"
Updated!
Re: To Save a Princess Feedback Thread
Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2023 11:21 pm
by kerkersklave
I like this series and also this part, but it felt a bit short compared to the previous ones. Also it felt a bit dissatisfying as an ending, I usually prefer a happy ending where I end up as the permanent slave of the main character
Re: To Save a Princess Feedback Thread
Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2024 7:51 am
by SethK
Hey shattered! I am a bit late to the party it seems but nonetheless I wanted to thank you for this tease, especially for incorporating my idea to a certain extent in the ending
While for me the second part is my favourite part of the series, this one has definitely interesting elements. I do have one spoilery note though:
- Spoiler: show
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In the end Piper edges you a few times before ruining the orgasm. For a narrative standpoint I would argue that a quick ruin would have been more fitting but probably also less fun to play, especially when the middle part is considered. So, from this perspective you are stuck between a rock and a hard place.
One idea I would have to solve the problem would be to merge 2 and 3 together and maybe skip the first section of 3 as well as skipping a bit of the end of 2. I.e., the player is only unlocked at the end for this quick ruin while having been teased extensively in the cage. (Or of course if the player chooses to "betray" Piper much more teasing with a full orgasm. )
Please consider this just a minor suggestion, as I do enjoy your teases quite a lot and I am looking forward to giving your new one a go!