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Although you can't make everyone happy, hopefully the majority will enjoy it. I have been listening to some of the gripes on here and kept them in mind. It's not as long as I wanted it to be, as once I got into it, I realized it's alot of work. I will probably give it another try in the near future. Hopefully this one is good enough to build on.

Thoughts? Criticism? Complaints?

Thought you did a great job! Nice job with the writing. There is an art to the build up and I think you nailed it. Hope you will do more in the future

hello submissivemaletx,

I thought the tease was excellent, especially for your first go. I breezed through it quickly, just reading the task. But from what i saw it was very good, i may get john to do it later to see what its like.

ill probably post more feedback after that. I hope you keep making teases. And i am also very glad that someone else finds creating teases tough. I though i was the only one and felt a little stupid

Thank you both.

Mz_Teneale,
I definately underestimated the difficulty in writing one, glad to hear i'm not the only one.





After seeing the voting and such, i'm definately interested in writing more.

Agreed, she is definitely hot. I'd love a link to her pictures too.

And the tease was amazing. I just loved the tone you took with her -- stern but gentle, clearly in power but able to establish that with undertones instead of direct words.

Very well done, my friend.

Thank you for the compliments. I plan on using her for the sequel to that tease.

http://www.petitenympha.com/st/niches/p ... eron.shtml

Great tease, thank you. Looking forward to your next one.

Thanks for the tease...I love the sit on the dildo...VERY imaginative, and something I've never done. I happened to have one from years ago, and it was small enough that I was willing...Got into a good muscle burn on my thighs, but had a mind blowing orgasm! I'm finding that anything that stimulates my prostate intensifies my orgasm. Thanks!

This tease is excellent. I'm looking forward to the sequel.

It has a good pace to it and left me very frustrated. And Princess Cameron is hot. I love teases that use images of women who appear to be standing over you - and looking down at you. Perfect!

thanks for the feedback. I'm having some internet troubles right now but I hope to start working on the sequel this week.