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Sissy Cure Tease Series
Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2023 8:38 am
by idg69
Re: Sissy Cure Tease Series
Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2023 8:51 pm
by bazoomba0
I loved this tease very much, my only complaint would be that it ran very long otherwise it was perfect.
Re: Sissy Cure Tease Series
Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2023 1:57 am
by RandomName
This tease should probably include a disclaimer that it's meant to intensify and not reduce a sissy addiction. May seem obvious, but horny clouds the brain.
Re: Sissy Cure Tease Series
Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2023 11:22 am
by idg69
bazoomba0 wrote: ↑Sat Jun 03, 2023 8:51 pm
I loved this tease very much, my only complaint would be that it ran very long otherwise it was perfect.
I actually agree with this a ton. It was meant to be two teases. Intro and Day 1. Is there a way to duplicate a tease so I can do this?
Re: Sissy Cure Tease Series
Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2023 11:22 am
by idg69
RandomName wrote: ↑Sun Jun 04, 2023 1:57 am
This tease should probably include a disclaimer that it's meant to intensify and not reduce a sissy addiction. May seem obvious, but horny clouds the brain.
Good point. Will do.
Re: Sissy Cure Tease Series
Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2023 11:26 am
by idg69
RandomName wrote: ↑Sun Jun 04, 2023 1:57 am
This tease should probably include a disclaimer that it's meant to intensify and not reduce a sissy addiction. May seem obvious, but horny clouds the brain.
Also, in the third part of the story, our protagonist begins to realize this.
Thank you for trying it.
Re: Sissy Cure Tease Series
Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2023 12:33 pm
by anavialon
Really well done tease! I appreciate the length and that once you start, it doesn't really stop until the end! It makes sense that this was two parts squished into one, maybe another breathing/focusing break could be incorporated to break it up a little?
I thought it was well written and like the idea that there is a whole series mapped out and on the way.
Background voice: Any chance you could use an AI voice program instead of the generic robotic voices?
https://beta.elevenlabs.io/ can create decent sounding human voices (you can train it to sound like celebs/dommes etc) but this is a personal preference, just a non robotic voice may enhance the experience more. Maybe as the day goes by the voice becomes more human or you have different voices on different days?
Overall: Really enjoyed this tease and looking forward to the future instalments!
Re: Sissy Cure Tease Series
Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2023 8:27 pm
by SissyFace
Re: Sissy Cure Tease Series
Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2023 11:46 pm
by PlayfulGuy
Whoa! Hadn't heard of this one before and I've been looking for something like this.
Thanks for posting that!
And I hope to get a chance to try this tease out soon but it will probably be a week or so. Busy times...
PG
Re: Sissy Cure Tease Series
Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2023 11:11 am
by idg69
Voices are going to get much better! Thank yoU!
Re: Sissy Cure Tease Series
Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2023 2:20 pm
by Jassinov
Really liked the tease! I agree that the tease is rather long, I personally don't mind, however. Instead maybe check points / break points (just something like confirming you are ready for the mantra section) could be an option?
I, for example, had to wait for a delivery and was thinking "Oh, can I finish this section before the delivery person arrives?". Luckily everything worked out just fine
Re: Sissy Cure Tease Series
Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2023 3:59 pm
by idg69
bazoomba0 wrote: ↑Sat Jun 03, 2023 8:51 pm
I loved this tease very much, my only complaint would be that it ran very long otherwise it was perfect.
A couple people noted this so I added some jump to spaces. Hopefully it does not interrupt the flow too much.
Thank you for the great feedback!
Re: Sissy Cure Tease Series
Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2023 8:15 pm
by Edgesurfer
Hey there,
I just wanted to thank you for this marvelous first part. It really is a piece of art. The story took quite it's time but I enjoyed every minute of it
. I can't wait for day 2. Please keep on the great work.
Re: Sissy Cure Tease Series
Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2023 2:28 pm
by rubber_dick
Not usually into raceplay (in fact, that's usually a turn off), but I enjoyed this one — so far, no explicit call-outs of BBC and such, which means it kinda plays a secondary role. Hoping it stays kinda like that?
I appreciate the anti-sissy-but-not-really aspect, honestly. It ran long, but I didn't mind that. Looking forward to future installments in the series!
Re: Sissy Cure Tease Series
Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2023 8:57 pm
by idg69
Edgesurfer wrote: ↑Mon Jun 05, 2023 8:15 pm
Hey there,
I just wanted to thank you for this marvelous first part. It really is a piece of art. The story took quite it's time but I enjoyed every minute of it
. I can't wait for day 2. Please keep on the great work.
Thank you so much. It means a lot me. Really.
Actually, the last couple comments inspired me to start work on Day 2 today (as opposed to waiting until the weekend, don't tell my boss!
I'll make the next one a little bit quicker paced and shorter, but not by much.