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feedback for never ever
Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 5:54 am
by Quazwierdcev283
I'm sorry to have to give negative feedback (seeing how this is your first comment on your first webtease) but I found you tease hard to read because you didn't separate when it was the girl talking or the "stroker. If you could add in quotation marks and/or line breaks that would be great.
Re: feedback for never ever
Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 5:55 am
by Quazwierdcev283
other than that and the length, good job
Re: feedback for never ever
Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 6:23 am
by all2true
I hope to see you keep working on teases.
Like the model.
Unfortunately the tease was only two pages,
which is far to brief
Plz create a tease at least 15 pages in lenght
(girls arn't the only ones that like big things- hehe- Lord I have been wearing ladies stuff to long)