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[FEEDBACK] The most beautiful bosom

Posted: Sun Mar 26, 2023 12:45 am
by Ricartus
Hi!
I am just releasing my first tease, which is a sort of parody of the mythical Judgement of Paris.

The origin of this tease is a bit peculiar, since at first I just collected some pictures of boobs and I created a collage (here is a link to it: https://www.imagebam.com/view/MEJRMPS).
Then, I had the idea to do a survey, to find out which bust size was the most popular (https://forms.gle/swaA9jaR6s2bTahL8)*.
Finally, I created a whole tease about it, as an introduction to the collage of pictures and to the survey (https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=62062).

Please share with me your feedback, thoughts and suggestions!

If this tease is appreciated, maybe I will release another one featuring boobs in the future: I already have some materials to work with!

*I had to change the survey-hosting website because the previous one had a limit to the number of responses which could be registered for free. Okay, Google, you have won once again.

Re: [FEEDBACK] The most beautiful bosom

Posted: Sun Mar 26, 2023 8:05 am
by mondany
Such good writing!

Re: [FEEDBACK] The most beautiful bosom

Posted: Sun Mar 26, 2023 10:23 am
by arthurb
An impressive array of lovely bosom :w00t:

Re: [FEEDBACK] The most beautiful bosom

Posted: Sun Mar 26, 2023 4:31 pm
by Ricartus
mondany wrote: Sun Mar 26, 2023 8:05 am Such good writing!
Thank you very much! I feared to make linguistic errors... The fact that the plot itself is pure nonsense is another matter enterely! :lol:
arthurb wrote: Sun Mar 26, 2023 10:23 am An impressive array of lovely bosom :w00t:
Really! :love: That's what I wanted to share, and the reason why I created this tease!

Re: [FEEDBACK] The most beautiful bosom

Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2023 2:15 am
by mondany
Selfishly hoping you'll make some feminization teases (in the vein of your avatar) or forced-bi teases in the future as I'd love to see your takes on my favorite tease topics, but I'll try anything you make even if only for the creative writing :thumbsup:

Re: [FEEDBACK] The most beautiful bosom

Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2023 3:16 am
by Ricartus
mondany wrote: Mon Mar 27, 2023 2:15 am Selfishly hoping you'll make some feminization teases (in the vein of your avatar) or forced-bi teases in the future as I'd love to see your takes on my favorite tease topics, but I'll try anything you make even if only for the creative writing :thumbsup:
I love that vein very much too, but, unfortunately, at the moment I have neither materials nor much time to do that. However, I hope to please you recommending to you a feminization video game that I find delightful: its name is "Trap Quest" and I like the 13.8.0 "Wonderfuller" version the most (later versions lack porn pictures, because of a change in the policies of Patreon). Here is a link, I hope you enjoy: https://tfgames.site/index.php?module=viewgame&id=137

Can I also ask you some feedback? Among the tags of my tease, I selected "feminization" because of the fantasy about "which boobs would you like to have if you were a girl?" and because no really appropriate tags for the tease (e.g. "boobs" or "beauty contest") were available in the list. Do you think that this tag is misleading and I should remove it? Or do you think it's fine?

Re: [FEEDBACK] The most beautiful bosom

Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2023 5:02 am
by mondany
Thanks for the link and version recommendation, going to check that out :smile:

I don't think there was really enough feminization content in the tease to justify the tag, though there were a couple hints of it of course. But I don't know if I'd call it misleading. The tag is what intrigued me and I appreciated the very subtle undertone of feminization. Either keeping or removing it seem fine to me.