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[Feedback] Take it slow
Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2022 11:05 pm
by Stefanal
Hi all,
This is the first tease i created. Hope you liked it. Let me know what can be improved.
Cheers, Stefan
Re: [Feedback] Take it slow
Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2022 12:11 pm
by Achatius
I love POT-Teases. Unfortunatly there are so few of them.
However its called "Take it slow" it could be at least faster or at least clickable sentences. Especially when you want to play it again.
Re: [Feedback] Take it slow
Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2022 12:26 pm
by Kaelis
Achatius wrote: Wed Aug 24, 2022 12:11 pm
I love POT-Teases. Unfortunatly there are so few of them.
However its called "Take it slow" it could be at least faster or at least clickable sentences. Especially when you want to play it again.
I feel like that defeats the entire point of the tease.
If you could just click through and skip everything, you may as well not bother.
Re: [Feedback] Take it slow
Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2022 12:49 pm
by Achatius
Kaelis wrote: Wed Aug 24, 2022 12:26 pm
Achatius wrote: Wed Aug 24, 2022 12:11 pm
I love POT-Teases. Unfortunatly there are so few of them.
However its called "Take it slow" it could be at least faster or at least clickable sentences. Especially when you want to play it again.
I feel like that defeats the entire point of the tease.
If you could just click through and skip everything, you may as well not bother.
I don't mean rushing through the tease. But i think the amount of time per sentence is too long. I am able to read it 10x until next comes.
Idea: At the end before first cumming increase the beat. For me it would take decades until I cum with such slow speed. And for the Post Orgasm Phase a button if you come again. Maybe with another storyline (as mentioned 1-10 ratio) ;)
Re: [Feedback] Take it slow
Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2022 9:04 pm
by anonymister
On my phone, seems like the most recent text box is too far down and I cannot see it, just an outline of the top border, until the next one appears. Near the beginning when she asks if I agree to the rules, I am guessing there's a box I have to click ?
Re: [Feedback] Take it slow
Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2022 1:50 pm
by Achab1851
hello!
I played your tease and generally agree with what you said above.
There are a few small mistakes that need to be corrected, especially the possibility of skipping some parts (the interlude parts for example) and maybe adding a bit longer and more articulate sentences.
For the rest I found it a very exciting tease and, allow me, 'old style' as I like them and which are now scarce here on Milovana.
In any case, I have added it to my favourites.

Re: [Feedback] Take it slow
Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2022 10:37 am
by Achatius
Stefanal wrote: Tue Aug 23, 2022 11:05 pm
Hi all,
This is the first tease i created. Hope you liked it. Let me know what can be improved.
Cheers, Stefan
Will you make an update?