Milovana.com

Sooo my first Webtease is Online. Be sure to check it out!
Link: https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=58057

For any kind of Feedback or Bugreport, please use this forum!

My plan for this tease is to keep on developing. But I wanted to get some feedback before investing to much time.

If you want to support my journey be sure to check out my patreon: https://www.patreon.com/acanthisitta

Also my first language is not english, any Grammar/Type advices are welcome.

Thank you for reading

Edit:
V.1.2 is now available!

A few tweeks and Bugfixes are now live!

Also starting to implement more colour into the text! - still in progress
Now working on new endings. Hoping to start implementing more tomorrow.
News:

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- Added a new Ending

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Eva appeared (this one is really hard)

- Changed every Gate to seem a bit more unique.
- New Button implemented. You can now Edge 3 times before landing on the punishment tile!
- Changed one of the punishments slightly. (It went to the wrong page before)

Hey,

I think there are a error in the end:

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You did it. Now!

Choose a Pornstar that you want to cum to!

Currently only Lena is available!

After that each girl will give you 30 seconds to cum. If you dont Cum. Well every girl has a suprise!
> Big Tits <

After this, nothing happens

Hello ! There is definitely a few issues in this tease.

As avatarbr stated, the ending page does not exist, so we don't have any endings at all yet.
Also, a few other pages are missing, in particular the page at case 70.
And to finish (I will admit), I looked at the code of the tease and there a few pages that are not used at all. which is not really a bug or an issue, it is just too bad.

In the end, it could be a fun and exciting tease but in its current state, it is more frustrating to not have an ending or to get stuck somewhere.

I'm looking forward to see it when it will be fixed and with more content tho ! Keep it up

Already a big thanks for both of your feedbacks.

For now I fixed the ending and fixed page 70, couldn't test it yet but it should work.
I made quite a lot of changes at the end, that's why it came to these errors, sorry about that.

About the empty tiles: Yes that is true, I am currently working on getting more instructions even when you are not on a Gate tile.

Great tease!! In fact, the beat meter is my favorite part. Not over the top loud like some, and it hits vibe reminiscent of some arcade games from the 80's.

tkct78 wrote: Wed Jul 20, 2022 2:17 pm Great tease!! In fact, the beat meter is my favorite part. Not over the top loud like some, and it hits vibe reminiscent of some arcade games from the 80's.

Thank you for this review. I will keep updating so check it out again if it is in beta version.