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Hi guys.

This is my first contribution on this forum.
I have discovered a lot of good things on this site and i think it's the time to share my own work

I just finished my first video.
I've planned to do a 30/40 minutes cock hero, but that's too hard for my low knowledge in editing video, so i gave up

My first work is a simple jerk off challenge based on pictures.
This is a softcore materiel, because i like the erotic teasing more than hardcore.

Hope you will enjoy it !!!
And if i got good returns it will be motivate me to make more
But don't hesitate to criticize my work ..... if it's to teach me and make me progress

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The Jerk Off Challenge - Holly & Friends
Softcore based on pictures
7 min 25 lenght


VIDEO LINK ===> https://1fichier.com/?qc6xuzr5abwhjjilq1s7

Wanted to try this out but the download link took me to a page that's in French, and I clicked what I thought was the right stuff and ended up on some error page, also in French, and now it's making me wait an hour before I can download anything. I eventually discovered that the button that let's you select the language on the page was being hidden by a pop-up about accepting cookies, which I couldn't read, so didn't know to click on something to make it go away.

Here's a link to the English page for anyone interested: https://1fichier.com/?qc6xuzr5abwhjjilq1s7&lg=en

Perhaps you could post the video to one of the streaming sites where we can just watch it?

When I get it downloaded later I'll give it a try, but I can tell you right away I wish it was longer. 7 minutes is too short for me. I like this kind of challenge to be more in the 20 minute range, but that's me.

Thanks for the upload, and I will let you know more when I get to try it.

PG

Okay, so I got it downloaded and tried it out, and I must say this is an excellent first effort, and I hope you make more. I give it 4 stars, but really I could say 5 stars, since the only reason it's not 5 is the length being shorter than I like.

I liked your choice of music and material and they way you used it. Panning back and forth and up down the still images, and zooming in and out kept it "dynamic" even though you are using still images. And I thought the stroking instructions were very well done too. Good variety, and good back and forth between fast, slow and free style. The whole thing felt good to me.

I really appreciated that the music was not overwhelming, but it had a good beat you could easily stroke to as well.

The only thing I noted that I would change is:

Spoiler: show

Around 2:20 you have a warning about a danger zone approaching, then again around 2:35 you have a warning "danger zone very close", then at 2:40 a huge warning sign for the start of the danger zone. That's at least one warning too many. I would honestly omit both warnings, and just have the big warning when it starts, but modify it so it tells you "Max Stroke for 1 minute" or whatever it is. I think it was even less than a minute, so for me (being an older guy) one minute of fast stroking is not that dangerous, particularly that early in a video. After 10 minutes, it's a different story, and I realize that for younger guys it's probably different too.

Overall, it's really excellent! And if you added edging in future videos that would be awesome!

Thanks for your hard work, and thanks for sharing it.

PG

Welcome to Milovana, stephanexxx!

I'll check your work later.

Links don't seem to work...

That's some fine craftsmanship. Dedicated to achieving the vision despite very limited resources.

I love spirits like this.

ilikethesun2009 wrote: Sun Jul 17, 2022 12:20 am Links don't seem to work...

Guilherme_1988 wrote: Mon Jul 18, 2022 11:22 pm Links are not working i guess... maybe you can post this on mega??

I just tried the link I posted earlier and it worked fine. https://1fichier.com/?qc6xuzr5abwhjjilq1s7&lg=en
When you first click on the big orange button saying "free download is slower" it seems like nothing happens for 5 or 10 seconds, then the screen finally updates and you have to click another button (forget what it said), then the actual download button finally appears.

PG

Hi everyone
Sorry for the year without responding you.

I really appreciate all your comments and glad to see that some enjoyed my video


Good new, i'm making a new one
Always based on softcore pictures (because i like the way it let free the imagination)
But, some improves :

- Softcore but little more hardcore than my first video
- 3 rounds
- around 18 minutes (my first video was 7 minutes)

So, Stay tuned !!!

stolenprofile wrote: Mon Aug 28, 2023 6:00 am I think the link is broken

I just downloaded it from the original link.
612 MB for only 7:26 at 1080p.

First I dismissed the cookies message (private window that I will close anyway),
then I dismissed a message about subscribing or something.
Then there was a Download button... I think I had to click two download buttons in succession.

Just read carefully and dismiss whatever's in your way, and click the "real" download button.
You might need to turn off a pop-up/ad blocker too. I did not have to, but it depends on your browser & settings.

Just do it in a private window that you close after the download, and any cookies, etc. won't matter.
I hope that is helpful.