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[RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Artificial Alyssia 3: Alyssia Submits
Posted: Tue May 03, 2022 1:55 pm
by bennygrimm
Sorry for the delay on the final chapter, but the conclusion of the New American Compandroid series is here.
Please feel free to post feedback, thoughts, or criticism here, and thanks for reading!
ARTIFICIAL ALYSSIA 3: ALYSSIA SUBMITS
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Artificial Alyssia 3: Alyssia Submits
Posted: Wed May 04, 2022 11:25 pm
by bennygrimm
*bump*
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Artificial Alyssia 3: Alyssia Submits
Posted: Wed May 18, 2022 8:46 am
by jockpseudonym
It’s a shame the release went a little funny so you haven’t gotten feedback here, because this was really impressive. Any plans from here yet? Would you mind saying what the other chapters you considered doing were?
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Artificial Alyssia 3: Alyssia Submits
Posted: Fri May 20, 2022 5:27 am
by sparktimmy
For some reason I didn't see part 3 until a week after it released - not sure what happened.
About the tease, I loved it overall (reminded me a lot about Gia's Game and your other teases), but I was a bit thrown off by Veronica coming into the story to take over Alyssia. I had kinda completely forgot about Veronica as a character by the point she's back (mainly because Part 2 seemed to be going more towards Alyssia retaining complete control over the character).
Still one of the best teases on this site, keep up the great writing bennygrimm - can't wait for your next story.
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Artificial Alyssia 3: Alyssia Submits
Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2022 3:58 am
by Sisyphuster
Wow, incredible! What a great ending. Personally, I LOVED having Veronica come back, the only person that could have upended the whole power dynamic. Loved how it was so dark yet light at the same time. Great work! Thank you!