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Hello,

Citadel of Lust is something I've started working on earlier this year. It's a story-driven Cock Hero, where choices you make will define the outcome of your adventure. It's inspired by my favourites - the Island and Canto series.

Some features:
- choose your own adventure Cock Hero
- 4 endings, each allowing you to cum, but some in a different way than you think
- 4 boss rounds, each with a different challenge
- 21 unique rounds in total (2 softcore rounds, mostly hardcore)
- high replayability - over 50 possible ways to play, if you want to uncover all secrets of the Citadel you will need to pass the video at least 4 times
- items that you collect along the way that will help you on your journey (yep, I snatched the idea from the Canto, but without the points system)
- approx. play time per session: 40-60 min

What's done so far:
- whole concept of the story
- 6/21 rounds completed (this includes story, beatmeters etc. as well)
- downloaded most footage I need for the remaining rounds

So what's the whole fuzz about?
I feel like I'm in the comfortable spot where I know it's a project I will finish. However my big drawback is English, and since it's a story-driven Cock Hero I thought that I might ask for the help of people who are actually good at it. For interested I can offer footage of the first 15 minute long story fragment (1/3rd of the whole story) along with the text file. I'm looking for feedback in terms of grammar, text readability, maybe some lines in the story can be different as well. Keep in mind that testing will definitely spoil part of the story for you.

The project is still months from completion, but I feel like it's a good spot for a little tune up. If anyone is interested then your help is greatly appreciated!

Stay tuned for a release later this year (hopefully)

Congratulations, eXquisite! I look forward for your production. Since you are not in a hurry, I don't mind to look at your text file. I'm not an English expert, so if a writer reach out to you, go with them.

I'm not an expert, but English is my primary language. I'd be happy to review everything and give you notes/adjustments.

Wow can't wait to get it

Hey there, I've taught a little bit of basic English and am a native speaker. I'd be happy to help! I'd probably ask a few questions to make sure we get the right subtext, but if you're willing to work with me there, I would love to help you out!

Hi exquisite,

Very excited about your production!
Not only am I good at English, but also I have been told I am good narrating stories. I would be glad to help in anyway, and give my suggestions. For a story based production it is quite important that the narration comes together homogenously with the video.
Let me know...

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Kinkstuff

Wow guys, I just wanted to say that I'm astonished by the amount of support you offer I contacted few of you for now, but will keep you updated if I need extra help. Stay amazing!

Hi eXquisite !

I don't want to push you, as it does require time to produce quality content, but can you give us some news about the project ?
Anyway I wish you the best on this

Yeah, let me know if you need any help with English text stuff. I'm good at it and am happy to get your project to the quality you want it.

Any updates on if this project is still in development? Somehow this thread went completely under my radar. I’ve done translation work in the past for other CH, so if you need someone to proofread or revise text let me know.