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[Feedback] [PreTease] Pussy Free Pledge
Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:07 am
by Anxiety
I usually love Pussy Free teases, but ye gods, I hate capitalizing every word in a sentence. I couldn't get through typing 10 iterations of that before being completely irritated out of the mood. I'm somewhat curious how it ended, but it's not any fun if I'm not horny. 1 star.
Re: [Feedback] [PreTease] Pussy Free Pledge
Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2022 9:18 am
by AGoodbody
It gets worse on line 2. Flags as a mistake when you write an uncapitalized word as instructed. Also, not about to send someone my email address. I get all the fucking spam I can handle now.
Re: [Feedback] [PreTease] Pussy Free Pledge
Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2022 6:39 pm
by Anxiety
I continued and—My God—you're right. Line 2 is so much worse.
For anyone curious who doesn't want to suffer the agony of repeatedly typing horrible grammar:
Line 1: I Am A Pussy Free Beta.
Line 2: I Will Never Ever pursue for Pussy nor will I try to get it by force.
The phrase "pursue for" is so painful. Also, the author thinks making me think about rape will turn me on? It's redundant anyway.
Was anyone masochistic enough to go further?
Bad grammar doesn't normally bother me in a tease. I just figure it's in character. It's forcing me to repeatedly type this that does exactly the opposite of what a tease is supposed to do.