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Re: Feedback: The Tournament

Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2022 8:10 am
by Somerfield42
I'm a big fan of this type of tease (i.e. some competition where you have to resist lots of hot girls trying to make you cum) and this has a good variety in models and sexy action. I also like that the timers are not too long as I don't like looking at the same picture for >30 seconds. My main constructive feedback is that there are lots of dead ends / bugs at the moment, so they need fixing. Also I like that you gave the girls their own speech as this gives them their own personalities, but the writing could use some tidying up as the English is incorrect in several places. But other than that, I'm very excited to see the finished article!

Re: Feedback: The Tournament

Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2022 2:56 pm
by Somerfield42
Oh ok - that could be better explained somewhere. And even after beating 5 cards, it still does not go to the Ace (gives you the option, but then freezes when you select "Yes"), but maybe that's because it is not fully finished? As a result, I can't move on from the "Clubs" section.

Re: Feedback: The Tournament

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2022 9:23 am
by Somerfield42
Hey - any update on this one?

Re: Feedback: The Tournament

Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2022 3:55 pm
by VolatileCrimson
Any updates coming up soon for this tease?

I'm genuinely looking forward to it. :-D