Re: Feedback: The Tournament
Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2022 8:10 am
I'm a big fan of this type of tease (i.e. some competition where you have to resist lots of hot girls trying to make you cum) and this has a good variety in models and sexy action. I also like that the timers are not too long as I don't like looking at the same picture for >30 seconds. My main constructive feedback is that there are lots of dead ends / bugs at the moment, so they need fixing. Also I like that you gave the girls their own speech as this gives them their own personalities, but the writing could use some tidying up as the English is incorrect in several places. But other than that, I'm very excited to see the finished article!