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Hi Guilherme_1988,

I'm so glad you are giving it a try. You don't have much to critique. One video clip over the top of two songs. It's a start and it's where we all started. Next try cutting in more video clips. Try to place the video cuts at transitions and beats in the song. Try to use clips that go with the music. When the music picks up, use a clip with more action. Try cutting the clips so that it each clip tells a tiny story. For example, start a clip where the girl is looking flirtingly down and end the clip with she is looking into the camera.

You've taken the first step to becoming a creator, CONGRATULATIONS!

-digitalparkinglot

You have reviewed everything. So it is only fitting that you now review your own creation.

Is this a Joke! Your a disgrace to the entire concept of Cock Hero and PMV's this is a waste of Mega download allowance.

Poor source quality, zero editing, watermark.
Basically it's just one clip with 2 songs attached. Yes, you can call it PMV, because there is Porn, there is Music and this is Video.
But it's far behind even from average PMV standarts.
It's good that you're making your first steps but I don't understand why you decided to share this video. PMV like this can create anyone in 1 hour or less, 95% of this time for scene/music selection and encoding.
You've asked for constructive feedback, I didn't mean to sound rude.

So if you want to improve try this:

- ​choose one song
- choose 3-6 videos
- mix these videos and make video cuts in right places of the song (you can make one cut every 8 or 16 beats for example, it depends on the song, you will feel when the time is right)
- don't use difficult video effects for your first attempts, it takes long time to learn how to use VFX properly, push too hard, you burn out quick
- no watermark please, use DaVinci, some free open source software or buy licence
- watch your final result, abstract from thing that it's your production, like it's created by someone else and if you happy with it - share with the world

Also you can choose your favourite PMV and copy style of it. You can even take PMV and replace video sequence with clips of your choice with same cuts timings, no one will judge you for that.
Good luck!

Hades- wrote: Tue Nov 23, 2021 12:12 pm - ​choose one song
- choose 3-6 videos
- mix these videos and make video cuts in right places of the song (you can make one cut every 8 or 16 beats for example, it depends on the song, you will feel when the time is right)
- don't use difficult video effects for your first attempts, it takes long time to learn how to use VFX properly, push too hard, you burn out quick
- no watermark please, use DaVinci, some free open source software or buy licence
- watch your final result, abstract from thing that it's your production, like it's created by someone else and if you happy with it - share with the world

^ These are really worthwhile tips!

Here's some that helped me get better at editing:
- Always use AT LEAST 3 different videos, preferably ones with multiple camera angles. That gives you more flexibility to cut between scenes and creates more action. Skipping through a long video with only a single angle and not much action makes it feel like you just put a 30 second clip on loop.

- If your software limits you while also creating such a massive watermark you should probably switch right away. I've heard good things about "Lightworks" as editing software, I personally use Davinci Resolve's free version and if all else fails you can always go to the Windows 10 Video Editor. It's incredibly bare bones and simple but at least it won't add a watermark.

- Never settle for anything below 720p. I know others will disagree and say 1080p should be the minimum but I personally don't mind the drop in quality that much. However 480p and lower is just outdated for todays standards, especially when it's fairly easy to find and download good quality videos on spankbang.

- Start simple and ease your way into editing while getting to know the software you're using. For exmaple: for your next project pick a song around 3 mins long, not too long, and try to fill the music with sexy scenes. Use simple cuts to connect the scenes and try not to go for longer than 15 seconds without cutting, that way the video gains momentum. As your experience with the software increases you can lower it to 10secs, 5secs etc. and make longer videos or use multiple songs.
Don't overwhelm yourself in the beginning, it's easy to get frustrated by high expectations.

- And most importantly don't rush yourself! I often get impatient myself when I'm halfway through editing, the process gets sloppy and the end product may look careless. Best thing to do is save, turn off your computer, sleep and come back the next day.
That way you can revisit and rewatch your video when energized and not be satisfied with something that's subpar.

Hope these help and looking forward to your next attempt!

The saga of Guilherme on milovana has made for rather fascinating interneting. I come to this forum more because of it.

This isn't a review of the video as such, but just a comment on some of the principles of success and progress.

Just the fact that you're will to start with something and release it is more than 95% of most people will ever even attempt. You're already ahead of the crowd.

That you're willing to release something you know is not great or perfect, as a beginner, is actually a good thing. You're not at a stage where you can obsess about making something that is top notch or that everyone will love. Rather, you need core constructive feedback and some direction on how to improve. Perfectionism has killed the raw potential of countless beginners in all lines of life.

As a teacher of music and a tutor, one of the things I look for in successful beginners is a willingness to try new things and a lack of perfectionism. It literally doesn't matter if your first few attempts are trash. The most important thing is that you learn from mistakes, gain experience, and continue to grow.

OrgasmPhantasm wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 3:21 am As a teacher of music and a tutor, ...

Is there a roadmap on inspiration, or how to create fair enough music, and long enough for a Cock Hero production? That way, it's legal, and somewhat enjoyable to the listeners.

pocetsize wrote: Tue Nov 23, 2021 12:07 pm Is this a Joke! Your a disgrace to the entire concept of Cock Hero and PMV's this is a waste of Mega download allowance.

no need to be an asshat every day your life.

Was it a good production? no. does he deserve unhelpful blathering like your comment. no. others trying to help him. You're not. Which do you think is more a disgrace?