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my second tease is done. For those of you that did the first. Could you please tell me did i get better or is still rough

Much better, less crowded on reading
I only read through it though, have not actually tried it yet.
It does seem to be a challenging tease.

For more pointers
You may want to title your forum post differently
Feedback: Stroke and more
Or FB: Stroke, Stroke and more

You may want to also run each page through a spelling grammar check.
I personally am not the best at this.
However you may note there are those on this site who appreciate proper spelling/ grammar.

Next Concept,
Is this a tease you would want to do?
Did you try it out first?
I recommend posting a tease you enjoy.

All that said,
I think this was a definite improvement over last time.

thank you for the feedback i do appreciate. I want people to enjoy the tease as much as i like writing them. To answer your question yes i did do my own tease. Yes It was hard, i didn't make it myself