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I like the story and the girls. I prefer more edging, but I think you made a great first tease

Nice tease - i liked your scene selections

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[edit] I thought it was a bug[/edit] in the Valentina Nappi scene where you don't have a timer so it doesn't move onto the next page
The only option is to choose cum which ends the tease but that was intended

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"page60-6":[{"image":{"locator":"gallery:eff0fd90-e067-4cf5-b3ee-dc430fa94fd1\/1446630"}},{"audio.play":{"locator":"file:sex-fast.mp3","loops":0}},{"say":{"label":"<p>She starts moving.<\/p>"}},{"say":{"label":"<p>Please stop<\/p>"}},{"say":{"label":"<p><span style=\"color: #ba68c8\">No<\/span><\/p>"}},{"notification.create":{"buttonCommands":[{"goto":{"target":"Valentina2"}}],"buttonLabel":"Cum"}}],

But i see now that if you choose rest it takes you to page61 instead of page60 if you choose next

I think there was an edge button that should've been labelled cum that appears on the right but i forget where that was.
And for the leah gotti scene there was a button that was labelled "leah2" - i think it gets stuck in a loop if you click it because the timer disappears

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"page137":[{"image":{"locator":"gallery:3dd3c07d-994f-46a9-85ed-bfb616b734de\/1460462"}},{"audio.play":{"locator":"file:sex-fast.mp3","loops":0}},{"notification.create":{"buttonCommands":[],"buttonLabel":"Leah2","timerCommands":[{"goto":{"target":"page138"}}],"timerDuration":"30s"}}],

There's a few spelling and grammar mistakes but nothing which means you can't understand what is meant

Yeah! Finally some more hardcore teasing. How did you think one would play the cums? Are we allowed/forced to cum when the protagonist does? if so and anyways, some checkpoints would be really nice so we can play "realtime" :)

apart from that, great first work! :)

Great first tease! I liked the dialogue, so would've wanted to see a bit more of that as you get into it with each girl. Really good selection of girls too. The ability to skip to certain parts would be great, as I'd like to go back to check out certain endings now I've completed it without having to go through the initial sections again.

how do i start it? it only says i can start at day 3 and not day 1?

The third and sixth days will not start.

The tease is cool. I will be waiting for your next work.