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[Feedback] Mistress Belle's Edging Challenge

Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2021 11:47 pm
by Triple Alfa
I thought this was a great tease. I really enjoyed myself. Challenging, but just barely doable.
That said there were a few minor issues I would like to address:
1) After the opening explanation there should be some kind of ready/start button as players have no idea what to expect.
2) There was no warning at the start that there would be audio, so when the beats started I had to scramble to plug in my headphones, turn on the audio, etc. Meanwhile not being able to follow along.
3) The "cumming"-buttons are not deleted when moving to the next section, so I ended up with three buttons.
4) The ending was a little short as I wasn't finished yet when she started wrapping up. I also would have preferred more encouragement during the orgasm to make it feel more like a big reward.
5) In general adding more teasing & taunting text during longer edges would increase the quality even more. There are currently a few points where you are just staring at images for quite a while.
6) Bug: Near the start of the game the following text appears and does not automatically advance:
Spoiler: show
Why did you speed up I didn't tell you to stroke faster....

(Medium Speed)
Edit1:
For fun I went back and checked what would happen if I clicked the "cummnig"-button and was a bit disappointed. The comments she made after were nicely done, but the ruin itself has no teasing, taunting, mocking, etc. to play around with the experience. I also doubt that 20 seconds would be enough to fully finish for everyone.

Re: [Feedback] Mistress Belle's Edging Challenge

Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2021 2:29 am
by haffin5
it was super easy for me to finish

Re: [Feedback] Mistress Belle's Edging Challenge

Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2021 11:01 pm
by Triple Alfa
Thank you for your work and your reply.
HellaLittyBroPoggers wrote: Mon Mar 29, 2021 1:25 am The description of the tease does say "partial metronome" which does tell you there's sound.
I did miss that, but keep in mind that that description is not visible if players are linked directly to your tease.