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Hey, I just started making my first webtease. It's pretty short, I'd like people that are interested to try it out and say what they think about the format.
The plan is to make the story longer, with maybe more characters. I'm still deciding if I want to have more choices up for the player or just a single path for the player to take with little free will left for the player.
I just want some feedback before I go any further.

https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=49336

This tease is so good, I really enjoyed it all the way through. It would be nice to be able to jump to a specific part if you do end up making the tease longer, like you get an option to stop whenever you want and you get a password, kinda like a save in games.
I really enjoyed the tease so far.

nhiss wrote: Fri Mar 05, 2021 10:01 pm This tease is so good, I really enjoyed it all the way through. It would be nice to be able to jump to a specific part if you do end up making the tease longer, like you get an option to stop whenever you want and you get a password, kinda like a save in games.
I really enjoyed the tease so far.

Thank you so much for the feedback!
I do indeed intend to make you be able to jump to specific parts at the start of the tease if I make it longer. It might be a bit hard to do if I give alot of choices to a player, because you'd have to remake all the choices you had already made.
I like to let the player skip content if they want, I don't want to make timers or blocks to playing.

Yeah true, it does make it a bit tedious when you have to wait a long time for stuff. Anyway, I haven’t made any teases so I don’t know how hard it is to make them, but... Good luck with yours.

Not bad job for your first tease, nice images aswell
I looking forward to seeing more in this storie
Just post new part is easy then add a d making passwords on old
Would like to see another 3or5then add chastity

Keep it up

I love the story. The cast clearly has potential.
I mean, a college lead by Brandi Love with Adriana Chechik as the local slut?

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Tiny bug: Brandi calls me 'undefined'. Well, I don't mind some objectification but I think you forgot a variable.

This certainly has potential.
I look forward to seeing more of it.

Drool wrote: Sat Mar 06, 2021 10:39 am I love the story. The cast clearly has potential.
I mean, a college lead by Brandi Love with Adriana Chechik as the local slut?

Spoiler: show

Tiny bug: Brandi calls me 'undefined'. Well, I don't mind some objectification but I think you forgot a variable.

I am aware of the bug. The game lacks the initial section where I ask the player the name and allow him to skip to some part.

This tease has a lot of potential. I don't know much about making them, but if it is feasible, having a lot of choices and links would make this tease great.
An idea I have is that maybe at some point "the stepmom" would come and surprise visit the dorm or you go home for the weekend and if you went through her room before you left, she does something in response. Possibly the dorm mate could come home with you and embarrass you in from of your stepmom.

Nice work buddy. Looking forward for your next Tease

Nice one! I would love to see continuation with choices or without!