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[RELEASE/FEEDBACK] Christmas in the Heir (A Locktime Holiday Classic)

Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2020 8:02 pm
by bennygrimm
Hey everyone, happy holidays! This tease, Christmas in the Heir (A Locktime Holiday Original) is a parody on the Hallmark/Lifetime Original Christmas movies that are really formulaic and tacky. Obviously it is very NSFW, and it's told POV, but keep that in mind if the story seems a little bit silly at some points. Sorry it's a teensy bit late for Christmas, but I started this other epic, longterm Christmas tease, and realized I was nowhere near finishing it, when I got inspired by this idea, and thought it could be kinda fun.

I hope you enjoy it. Unlike most of my teases, there is no forced-bi, no (serious) feminization, and there is a decidedly happyish ending (even if it's slightly nonconsensual).


As a note: There is a *very* short epilogue to this that I intend to upload this evening, but I wanted to be absolutely sure to get this in in time for some reviews for the December TOTM contest. The epilogue will be male-top, will be fewer than ten pages, and is absolutely not essential to the rest of the story.

Thank you for reading. Happy Holidays! I'll update this post with a link once the epilogue is complete (and I'd love to get feedback on this story, whether or not you enjoy it!)

Re: [RELEASE/FEEDBACK] Christmas in the Heir (A Locktime Holiday Classic)

Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2021 7:41 pm
by bennygrimm
bumping for feedback.

Re: [RELEASE/FEEDBACK] Christmas in the Heir (A Locktime Holiday Classic)

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2021 12:03 pm
by kallisti
Great tease! Love it. :love: Can“t wait for the next chapter.

Re: [RELEASE/FEEDBACK] Christmas in the Heir (A Locktime Holiday Classic)

Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2021 2:11 pm
by krungg
There appears to be a page or some pages missing?

Between page 26 and page 27 time jumps forward and page 27 describes things having happened which were not described previously.

Re: [RELEASE/FEEDBACK] Christmas in the Heir (A Locktime Holiday Classic)

Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2021 11:23 am
by jockpseudonym
Do you still plan to release the epilogue?