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I really liked the concept behind these two teases, and I thought they were well executed.

I don't think the second tease was as strong as the first, and that might be because of the repeat of some of the photos or because it didn't go on as long as the first tease did.

However, overall, I thought you did an excellent job, and I enjoyed them both very much.

Slavechylde,

Thanks so much for the feedback. I'm very glad you enjoyed the tease. I took your advice and lengthened the second part of the tease slightly longer (adding a page and a few additional commands to the existing pages).

Writing the tease I was just thinking of the first part and so that's where my focus was. Of course now I realize the second part is at least as important.

Again, I appreciate your comment especially as it comes from someone who has created some very well written teases.

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I hope it's alright to add, to anyone else who is reading, if you like style and writing in a tease (or even if you don't) I highly recommend chylde's Conversation Series.

Thank you for the return compliment. I am glad folks like you have enjoyed my stuff.

I really liked the underwear stuff at the end of the first one. Fresh and new (to me at least) without requiring any expensive purchases or such.

Well done!