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Feedback: Long session with the mistress of your dreams

Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 12:14 am
by black moon
Hat euch der Tease gefallen? Meint ihr, ich sollte ihn übersetzen?

Ich hab ihn erstmal auf Deutsch gemacht, weil ich bei meinem ersten tease erstmal sichergehen will, ob er auch wirklich ankommt. Ihn auf Englisch zu machen ist halt doch ein bisschen Arbeit.

Aber meine nächsten teases mache ich wahrscheinlich von vorneherein auf Englisch.

Re: Feedback: Long session with the mistress of your dreams

Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 3:04 am
by Forevergallant
Please do the translation, The pictures are very hot.

Re: Feedback: Long session with the mistress of your dreams

Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 4:56 am
by bondageslave36
Hahaha... is that seriously a Southpark character? I never thought I'd see the day!

...yes, I, too, would like to see a translation.

Re: Feedback: Long session with the mistress of your dreams

Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 6:23 am
by t&d&cbt4me
Well, they did have Mr Slave for a while. I think that's Wendy from one of the episodes, but there have been so many I can't remember.

Re: Feedback: Long session with the mistress of your dreams

Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 6:43 am
by slaaf_1981
Seems to me the rating is good enough for a translation! Please do so...

Re: Feedback: Long session with the mistress of your dreams

Posted: Fri Sep 26, 2008 4:55 pm
by black moon
Wow, the feedback is REALLY good. More than four points! :w00t:

Okay, I'll do it soon when I have enough time.

The picture is not originally from Southpark but from a Southpark-Charakter-Editor I found in the Internet some time ago. It just looks like Southpark but in fact it's made by me (and looks a bit like a dominant woman I met once).

Re: Feedback: Long session with the mistress of your dreams

Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 2:59 am
by black moon
Okay, I have finished the translation now and you can play it.

Have fun and enjoy it - I enjoyed it a lot! ;-)

edit: The most important question to me: is the English tolerable???

Re: Feedback: Long session with the mistress of your dreams

Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 3:13 pm
by Cider
Black moon thankyou for doing the translation! it was GREAT!! when it was in German i looked through it and tried to put some of the text into a translator, but that didnt go so great. :weep: i was un-registered at the time so i didnt post feedback hoping that you would do the translation, and honestly i give this tease the credit for making me take the step to join up and post. I just had to give you feedback on how much i did like the tease. The english was tolerable, i noticed a few things that were not gramatically correct, but for me it didnt break the flow of the tease. Keep it up, i would have no shot at doing a tease in a second language. GREAT WORK. I smell a TOTM!!!!