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Hi,

its my first tease an i just found the EOS tutorial thread, so i still got a few things to try.

As im still working on it i would appreciate feedback as i dont have an definite plan for this.

Its more or less what i came up with last night.

So just let me think what you think about it.

https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=46591

Your tease looks great! I particularly love the selection of images.
I'd suggest you add some sort of introduction and a disclaimer that the game isn't finished yet.

But if you can create something like that in one night, I'm definetly looking forward to seeing how this tease evolves. ^^

PS: I hope you don't worry about the tease rating because they're really unreliable. However, 2.7 is way too low for your tease, so I'm sure it'll rise with the amount of views. :)

I was reluctant to try this out, due to the rating, but I agree: this should be rated much higher than it currently is.

I do have a couple questions, though. I assume the win condition isn't decided yet, because it's not fully done. What are "worship strokes?"

Also, after a while, whenever I choose Sun's door, it just goes away and I have to pick a different one. Is that intentional?

Thanks for the feedback.

As for now there is a simple metronome and i think the formatting is much more userfriendly by now.

Storywise im aiming for some random tease structured like some sort of purgatory you are not really supposed to leave or reach anything.

@qwertykeyboardddd: by worshipstrokes i ment just gentle ones.

The problem with suns room should be fixed by now

@Morexis: i dont really pay attention to the ratings. Also i think i will re-release this after a certain point

big fan of your last labyrinth tease btw

Seems really good!