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(FEEDBACK) Beta - The Mansion

Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2020 11:57 am
by Jazzlikeattorney2000
Hi all,

Ive posted my first webtease and planning on running it as a multi part series that gets into more intense and lengthy teasing, humiliation etc. This is just a snippet of what im looking to do. Ultimately you will control what your destiny and path is with everything tying into the same story, growing with each edition and improving if you play the previous versions first.

Was going to use the normal editor, then found the EOS and it is so much better and much more suited with the branching options. I have beat meters and audio that ill incorporate into future releases, but hadn't sorted that for this one.

Id love some feedback on the tease and idea.

Re: (FEEDBACK) Beta - The Mansion

Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2020 2:54 pm
by qatguy
i really loved the part, about being told to strip naked, then to redress.

that was fun.

Re: (FEEDBACK) Beta - The Mansion

Posted: Sun Apr 19, 2020 4:56 am
by Jazzlikeattorney2000
qatguy wrote: Sat Apr 18, 2020 2:54 pm i really loved the part, about being told to strip naked, then to redress.

that was fun.
Thanks, Ill be incorporating quite a few out of the box interactions. In a similar vein to that, issue is just getting the balance right, so it doesn't impact other actions.

Appreciate the feedback.

Re: (FEEDBACK) Beta - The Mansion

Posted: Sun Apr 19, 2020 9:23 pm
by Kristycookie
I liked the writing and images. I just wish it was longer / more edging, so I will wait patiently :)

Re: (FEEDBACK) Beta - The Mansion

Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2020 1:48 am
by Jazzlikeattorney2000
Thanks Both,

Yes it was short as it was only an introduction and testing of concept.
The Day 1 installment is much longer, trying to keep it under an hour though

Re: (FEEDBACK) Beta - The Mansion

Posted: Wed May 13, 2020 11:45 pm
by DeadpoolJr
Just gone through and I already love it! Awesome concept, well written and some brilliant picture choices (as well as the endings being fantastic too).

Impatiently waiting for the first instalment! :-D

Re: (FEEDBACK) Beta - The Mansion

Posted: Sun May 17, 2020 4:01 pm
by Jazzlikeattorney2000
DeadpoolJr wrote: Wed May 13, 2020 11:45 pm Just gone through and I already love it! Awesome concept, well written and some brilliant picture choices (as well as the endings being fantastic too).

Impatiently waiting for the first instalment! :-D
Not too long now, the majority is finished. Only 1 part left.
Ive got some time off work shortly that ill be using to focus on testing and cleaning it all up.