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Hi guys

This is my first webtease and I hope it is okay.

https://milovana.com/webteases/showteas ... 96c6a4e740

I welcome any feed back you guys might have

Thanks!

Hello, overall not bad , but few things from my point of view:

Spoiler: show

- girl (I knew it is her as I know K-On!, but others might be lost) comes to the interview and she does not even introduce herself and somehow I have a buldge already, hmmm (maybe make it she comes in and "trips" and you can see her panties (like on the concert - white with blue stripes))
- she comes in and starts ordering me around where I am the boss, why do I even decide if she passed then later, she can just tell me to make her pass
- the edges come way too quickly, like damn, I was not even fully hard yet and she made me edge
- I am sure you can find more pictures of Mio which can prolong the game a bit and prevent duplicates (i.e.: https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts?tags=akiyama_mio)
- there are lot of metronome beat sounds and this is the most annoying one I have heard yet
- at the end if you reject her, she might go further with the stuff, either offering more service or punishing you and leaves mad
- this one is just a question as I don't know how Eoes handles ".png" files with transparent background: did you convert the ".png" to ".jpeg" or something or does Eos just not support the transparent background? (either make it really transparent or add background as the "checker" style looks weird)
- maybe adding more comments from Mio's side like "This is my swimsuit, how do you like it?"
- I do not really have background what talent show it will be, so I do not know on what base should I take her in or let her fail the interview
- what you consider normal speed is what I consider slow and so on

That should be all, still quite enjoyed it as it was sort of polished and very good for a first try, many who make even 3rd game do not even come close to you, so good job and keep it up, looking forwards for the next one hopefully featuring Sawako sensei or Azunyan (Mio is stilll the best tho)

All the best

Danny

It's a nice vanilla JOI, I think. I can second Danny on the power dynamic being a bit weird, though.

Danny_CZ wrote: Wed Apr 15, 2020 1:38 am

Spoiler: show

- this one is just a question as I don't know how Eoes handles ".png" files with transparent background: did you convert the ".png" to ".jpeg" or something or does Eos just not support the transparent background? (either make it really transparent or add background as the "checker" style looks weird)

EoS doesn't allow one to upload png's at all.