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[FEEDBACK] Dreaming of Lexi
Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2020 6:32 pm
by lockgrid
Hi everyone,
Recently returned to making teases and I've been continuing a tease series I started but didn't really do anything with 9 years ago.
I've just released my latest one but its been given a rating of 1.2 and now is invisible from default results. I was surprised at this as I put the most effort I have into this latest one even editing the images in photoshop before uploading. It is story based as this is the ones I enjoy the most.
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=45182
I'm just looking on some feedback on what I can do to make things better for my next one or peoples opinions on why it would rate so low?
Thanks in advance.
Re: [FEEDBACK] Dreaming of Lexi
Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2020 8:33 pm
by Ph0enixAsh
Surely there is either a bug or some malicious intent, because I've been enjoying this series. I'm glad you posted this topic because I would've missed the chapter otherwise. There was next to nothing wrong with this one, aside from a couple minor spelling errors. You extra effort is clearly evident in this one.
I went ahead and gave you a top rating, which will hopefully help bring it back to the surface, and I look forward to your next installment! Keep it up!
Re: [FEEDBACK] Dreaming of Lexi
Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2020 8:38 pm
by chual99
I had similar thoughts as well.. The style isn't my cup of tea, really.. but it's not bad at all. There's no reason it should be rated so low.
The only suggestion I'd make is adjusting the size of pictures? Almost every page, the picture was large enough that all of the text of the tease was off the screen, so I had to scroll down on every page to read it. If you made the picture smaller, it'd be easier to read and see the picture at the same time.
I gave it a 5 as well, to help balance out the score.
Re: [FEEDBACK] Dreaming of Lexi
Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2020 8:53 pm
by lockgrid
Thanks for the feedback both.
I'll work on making sure the photos I use a re-sized next time so the text isn't moved below.
Re: [FEEDBACK] Dreaming of Lexi
Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2020 9:00 pm
by gfunk
I've read some of the previous chapters and enjoyed them. Perhaps the story needs to move a little quicker?
e.g. guy wakes from coma, wife teases and denies him, he gets home, wife teases and denies him, next day wife teases and denies him. Do you see a pattern there? the story isn't really moving, sure the characters are changing setting but they're still static.
Eventually something has to happen to the girl/guy, he goes crazy, or he starts to turn Bi-curious by thinking more and more about the big cocks she keeps talking about, or she admits she intends to cuckold him permanently, or he realizes his dick is shrinking, etc etc
Agree on the image size too, I had to view it at 67% to see image and text.
Its good though! never a 1.5
Re: [FEEDBACK] Dreaming of Lexi
Posted: Thu Apr 09, 2020 1:04 pm
by lockgrid
gfunk wrote: Wed Apr 08, 2020 9:00 pm
I've read some of the previous chapters and enjoyed them. Perhaps the story needs to move a little quicker?
e.g. guy wakes from coma, wife teases and denies him, he gets home, wife teases and denies him, next day wife teases and denies him. Do you see a pattern there? the story isn't really moving, sure the characters are changing setting but they're still static.
Eventually something has to happen to the girl/guy, he goes crazy, or he starts to turn Bi-curious by thinking more and more about the big cocks she keeps talking about, or she admits she intends to cuckold him permanently, or he realizes his dick is shrinking, etc etc
Agree on the image size too, I had to view it at 67% to see image and text.
Its good though! never a 1.5
Thanks for the feedback.
I'll admit I didn't really have an end in sight for the series hence why I did put 'part x of x' in the description. I'll plan out where the series is going so things will hopefully feel like they are moving at a quicker pace in the next instalment.
Re: [FEEDBACK] Dreaming of Lexi
Posted: Thu Apr 09, 2020 1:12 pm
by mangoman
I think it's a cool cycle that classic teases make a comeback. Your series is a bit too vanilla for me though, sadly.
Re: [FEEDBACK] Dreaming of Lexi
Posted: Thu Apr 09, 2020 9:51 pm
by MisterFlames
Gave it 5
and it's at 3.5 now.
Your tease is really not one that should be hidden by a low rating.
and it's at 3.5 now.