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Hey boys and girls,

if you like to say something about the mentioned tease series, feel free to do so in this post.

Otherwise have fun while playing & I hope you enjoy the story as much as the teasing

Best Regards,
RayRay77


Used Models:

Chapter 1

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Housekeeper: Alisa Amore
Gardener: Emily Grey
Wife: Anjelica / Ebbi
Early guest: Saju

Chapter 2

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Wife: Anjelica / Ebbi
Plotter & Neighbor: Jackie O
Woman in the shack: Demida
Woman at the piano: Tigra
Ex-Girlfried of Jackie: Elly

Chapter 3

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Handler: Tigra
Teacher: Megan
Dream-Wife: Anjelica / Ebbi

Changelog:

Chapter 1

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Part A:

• Changed Descripton
• Fixed 'Say'-Mechanic -> Now the tease only stops at Responses or specific Instructions

Part B:

• Changed needed items on start page
• Fixed two missing 'Notification:Remove'

Part C:

• Fixed an own mess up in the ending (had a page linked to 'Finish1' instead of 'End1')
• Fixed the fix and wrote an extra ending to eliminate the logic problems
• Added (& Fixed) Button to page after setup is done to jump to the breakpoint

Part D:

• Fixed sounds, which stopped to early during a tease with Alisa

Part E:

• Fixed link, which pointed you to the wrong page, if you made a decision in the tease
• Added (& Fixed) Button to page after setup is done to jump to the breakpoint

Part F:

Chapter 2

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Part A:

Part B:

• Deleted two lines, which changed your score to 1:1 no matter what you did (this was a test for myself to see if the rest was working )

Part C & Final:

Chapter 3

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Part A:

I think it's great! My favourite part was

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the "Look back" choice. I'm not sure why, maybe I don't like to rush or maybe I liked the idea of my character being drawn to her/ not wanting to leave already (or maybe I wanted to see "more" of her). Especially since you get to choose between spiritual/shy/flirty. I actually tried them all. Anyway I thought it was cool.

What irritated me slightly was the mix of timers and clicking next. I wasn't always sure whether I was supposed to click or not and at one point I stared at the screen for a while before realizing I needed to click. Overall I felt I clicked quite a lot.

Content was great, though. I like how you write and I'll be sure to check out the next part.

undeniable_denial wrote: Sat Jan 25, 2020 10:07 pm What irritated me slightly was the mix of timers and clicking next. I wasn't always sure whether I was supposed to click or not and at one point I stared at the screen for a while before realizing I needed to click. Overall I felt I clicked quite a lot.

Content was great, though. I like how you write and I'll be sure to check out the next part.

I just figured out while making Part 2, how to use Timers, Buttons and Clicks in a better way
It kinda felt weird for me, too. But now I know better

Thanks for the kind words.

Really enjoyed both parts. Its actual stroking plays out really well, the storytelling is great, and the edging at the end was tough! Any idea how long you plan to make the series? Keep up the great work

Small bug:

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I did encounter a bug in part B where in the bathtub, if you endure the entire thing, the button to say you are going to cum stays on the screen for the rest of the tease, and if you click it, it takes you all the way back. I clicked it once i finished the tease to see.

Banditsecond wrote: Sun Jan 26, 2020 7:59 pm Small bug:

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I did encounter a bug in part B where in the bathtub, if you endure the entire thing, the button to say you are going to cum stays on the screen for the rest of the tease, and if you click it, it takes you all the way back. I clicked it once i finished the tease to see.

Fixed. Thank you! Forgot two markers

Banditsecond wrote: Sun Jan 26, 2020 7:59 pm Really enjoyed both parts. Its actual stroking plays out really well, the storytelling is great, and the edging at the end was tough! Any idea how long you plan to make the series? Keep up the great work

Appreciate it
Chapter 1 will end either in a part E or F. Not quite decided.
Chapter 2 is already in my head, as well as Chapter 3

I played around with these last night and this morning, and I had a great time with them Awesome work

Based on the first two chapters, you're one of the best new content creators we've had here in a while. Thanks for contributing! I don't have any real critique to offer, either. There will always be places where I might want a faster pace, or a slower one, and of course I'd love to have my personal favorite fetishes featured more, but the concept and execution, including model choice, is excellent. Thanks rayray77!

Awesome job.. 10/10 for now these part A and B.

But i hoped you release all teases parts together.. :)


But still you are one of the best tease maker in this site! :)

The storyline is amazing! One of the best tease recently with nice story. It helps a lot to keep you through the entire tease rather than just stroking to some photos. The models are stunning too, what are the names of the models?

Interested. Will try at some point. Maybe it'll make me write more

Wow, thank you for these amazing words. They do keep me motivated and push me forward

Models:

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Alisa Amore
Emily Grey (Gardener)
Anjelica/Ebbi (Wife)

It's always the question, if you should release these parts one by one or make them all ready to be released and then publish each day one Part.
I do like the second option, but then parts sit finished on my pc and ... yeah. Always a difficult decision for me.

Now that you have released these amazing two teases, please don't make us wait until all are finished

Thank you for your amazing work so far, you are really talented!

Wow, the adventure just keeps getting better! I really like where you are taking the story. Thank you for all your work and thanks also for introducing me to Alisa, who is absolutely stunning

Really awesome series, i am finding me checking the site every day to see if a new chapter has come out
I usually don't like webteases too much because i feel they are a bit too linear, but yours is different. The storytelling is great, the models too and there are even a few choices to make here and there to make it feel like you are actually having a part in what's happening

Great series, cannot wait for the next chapter!