Re: [HYPE] Non-Nude CH
Posted: Tue Aug 06, 2019 12:10 am
Hi there! Thanks for sharing!
Here are the biggest issues:
Okay, so ignoring those technical difficulties you definitely have to fix, overall this CH is pretty good. I liked the idea and I wondered if you would warn the viewer if there weren't gonna be nudes in the video (would be funny that way, got to say). You got some balls to make a non-nudity CH, and I applaud you for that.
You start directly to the point, with fast rhythms and fast cuts. That is a good way of engaging people, but you should be careful with the general rhythm of the whole video. Knowing there is no nudity, you are using everything since the first minute of the video, which means there will be no scaling at all (to nudes, sex or whatever). Players may get bored if the game is too long. In my opinion, carrying this idea the whole video shouldn't be longer than 30 minutes. In my opinion, I remark.
Another thing I find it doesn't seem right is the very beginning. It starts with a message "Get hard" and starts without a warning. If you don't want to make an intro is OK, but at least try no to be so crude and cold. A simple cut of 5 secs with a girl dancing slowly would just do the trick.
And that's all I'd change. Sorry if I have been very hard. The truth is I love the girls in it, and love that editing you made, especially if it's your first time.
Great job! Would love to see more in the future!
Here are the biggest issues:
- The first 1-1 beats (0:47) are not synced, for sure.
- The first Double beats (1:55) are not synced, tho not sure about that (someone else can check it?).
- The 1-1 beats (2:30) are not synced either, for sure.
- The 1-1 beats (around 5:40) start losing the sync, although it is only noted in a few seconds.
- Same happens with the 1-1 beats around 7:00 (not sure about this one).
- The x8 beats (7:48 or so) are not synced.
- The 1-1 beats (10:20) are slightly not synced.
- This syncing problems are caused because the bps (beats per second) of the song don't match with the beating of the game. That way it fits at the beginning but they unmatch the more time it passes. They can be fixed just by cutting the beats and moving a little the samples when it start to desyncing. This will save you a lot of effort.
Okay, so ignoring those technical difficulties you definitely have to fix, overall this CH is pretty good. I liked the idea and I wondered if you would warn the viewer if there weren't gonna be nudes in the video (would be funny that way, got to say). You got some balls to make a non-nudity CH, and I applaud you for that.
You start directly to the point, with fast rhythms and fast cuts. That is a good way of engaging people, but you should be careful with the general rhythm of the whole video. Knowing there is no nudity, you are using everything since the first minute of the video, which means there will be no scaling at all (to nudes, sex or whatever). Players may get bored if the game is too long. In my opinion, carrying this idea the whole video shouldn't be longer than 30 minutes. In my opinion, I remark.
Another thing I find it doesn't seem right is the very beginning. It starts with a message "Get hard" and starts without a warning. If you don't want to make an intro is OK, but at least try no to be so crude and cold. A simple cut of 5 secs with a girl dancing slowly would just do the trick.
And that's all I'd change. Sorry if I have been very hard. The truth is I love the girls in it, and love that editing you made, especially if it's your first time.
Great job! Would love to see more in the future!