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Feedback: the lingerie company

Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 2:29 pm
by bird
Any thought is welcome.

Re: Feedback: the lingerie company

Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 4:33 pm
by Monique58
I really liked your little webtease. I always enjoy something that not only teases guys, but also encourages them to be a woman. It would be even more exciting to have them drinking their cum. It's okay to go ahead and feminize them more. I think your use of pictures was very good. They tied well with what you were writing. I look forward to your next tease.

Re: Feedback: the lingerie company

Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 8:07 pm
by topamart
Congratulations. I've enjoyed the tease. And the photos are marvellous. Go on with them.

Re: Feedback: the lingerie company

Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 8:23 am
by texturedshroom
I thought the only problem with the tease was the grammar. Other than that, great.

Re: Feedback: the lingerie company

Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 9:23 am
by bird
:-)
It could be.
English is not my first language.

Do you like to send me an errata corrige ?
I will correct any mistakes.