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Hello everybody,

today I released my very first tease here on Milovana! You can find it here:

https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=41730

The tease itself is quiet simple. My main goal was to test out the concept and to test out the Eos Editor. But still I'd be very happy to get some feedback :)

About the tease
[*] The story has a straight story
[*] Contains mostly freestyle stroking
[*] Stroking to own videos or images is possible
[*] Depending on your result, you can have one of around 30 very simple endings.

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The idea behind this tease is to force the player to keep himself always very close to the edge, so he is
able to cum on command.

The player does not know when he is allowed to cum. Because he furthermore only has a few seconds to cum, he is forced to keep himself very close to the edge if he wants to cum. The stroking time is chosen by random so it's different everytime.

I tested the tease a few times and while sometimes failing, I also managed to success a few times, so both should be possible. But because everyone is different, feedback on this point would be great!

If the player fails in cumming within the short time, he still has a second chance, if he follows one of the randomly chosen tasks.

Have a great day!

You should insert a random metronome as well.

Ok, there's a problem if we want to use it having it on the background: The first sound or signal that indicates we're ready to cum is barely audible. I don't know if its an issue of the first test or it will fail each time. The second signal (hands off) is pretty audible tho.

That being said, nice idea, this is an original tease that could be fun to play.
I hope there's not a lot of times between the chances to cum, because many people will fail.

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So I tried to follow the tease until she let me cum. I don't know if it was by design or you also make it so that the "cum seconds" are random also, but for my first time trying it was almost instantaneous, as in it will become "Hands off" as soon as I see the cum command.

I feel like the timer is too long, even though a lot of times my sessions last for longer than an hour. But I feel like for this concept, that's too much, especially when the tease itself is not stimulating enough by itself. The concept I think is not bad per se, but I think there's room for refinement. You might want to check out some "Snake and Ladder" kind of teases (I feel like your concept is quite similar to those teases) and try to add some flavor text to the pages even if random. Check out this tease, one of my favorites (you may not like the fetish, but the writing is top notch imo).

I like the idea of a tease that supplements other porn to make it into an edging session.
It's nothing we need a ton of teases on, but I think I will get back to this one now and then.

As for suggestions for improvement: I guess the ability to select a time range would be nice. I don't always want to invest up to an hour.

In the penalty cum part, whenver she asks a question and you answer 'yes' the tease gets stuck.

edit: nevermind, you just need to scroll down to see the next lines

I think adding a metronome would be a +++ .