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Feedback: Your new Life..

Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 9:44 pm
by salgmachine
Hey guys.

I finally managed to finish a tease I have started a long time ago. It is actually my first tease.
But i have open ears for constructive critics and ideas^^.
So, hope you liked it ^^

Oh and by the way, please let me know if my english is eh..well..useful? *g*

greetz
salgmachine

Re: Feedback: Your new Life..

Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 2:19 pm
by blackeagle225
I personally loved it. This hit every fantasy of mine. I think you did a great job. The pictures were beautiful and I really liked the picture link in the tease. This is already one of my favorites. I think your English was fine as well. Great tease, and I look forward to seeing more of them!