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The Slut Within

Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2019 2:12 am
by Marth85
Link to the tease: https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=39839

The intention was to develop a story where the main character explores all types of fetishes. The other characters should guide you though a more specific predilection of your choosing. However for the time being this is just an initial release and contains the first 3 story scenes with an online new acquaintance and your girlfriend that just came back from her vacation.

There are also 2 anal teases that can be unlocked after the first story scenes.

Please let me know what you think. I have been working on this for a few weeks and wanted to get some feedback before I develop it further.

Thanks for playing.


Versions Release
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0.12 - New Character - 10 May 2019
  • Story Remy 1
0.11 - Bug Fix - 27 April 2019
  • Story Caprice 1 not starting properly
0.10 - Initial release 24 April 2019
  • Story Caprice 1 & 2
  • Story Elsa 1
  • Milovana Anal - Easy & Hard
  • Jobs Initial Release
Game Mechanics
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MIloavana
This is the place where you can increase your skill levels and quickly reduce horniness.
You can reach this section by using your Home PC.

Hurting yourself
Performing actions while having low energy can hurt your health. You have a 5-20% change of getting hurt if you don't have enough energy to perform a specific action
You can heal yourself by going to the doctor at the Mall for $20 or wait a real life day to heal for free.

Breaking Telephone
There is a 2% chance of breaking the phone every time you visit the initial locations area. You wont be able to use your phone while it is broken.
You can repair it by going to the IT Support at the Mall for $20 or upgrade your phone to make it indestructible.

Upgrade Telephone
Upgrading your phone gives you access to additional in-game functionality:
- View numeric values of skill/attribute increase during teases
- Replay old teases from the phone menu
- Phone becomes unbreakable
You can upgrade your phone by going to the IT Support at the Mall

Plastic surgery
You will be able to increase your fitness by spending money at the doctor. This is a quick way to progress this skill which would alternatively require you to exercise regularly
You can perform a plastic surgery by going to the Doctor at the Mall

Plastic surgery
This will permanently epilate all your hair removing the need to shave every few days.
You can perform a laser epilation by going to the Doctor at the Mall
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Re: The Slut Within

Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2019 2:16 am
by Qybixxx
Link?

Qybixxx

Re: The Slut Within

Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2019 2:23 am
by Marth85

Re: The Slut Within

Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2019 7:49 am
by FATALES
Mega super work. A magnificent project and idea.
Click and point adventure. It's gonna be great when it's all done.
I found an Anal tease and one tease in mobile.

I also tried to make an adventure in nyx : https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=37018
I didn't finish it

Re: The Slut Within

Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2019 9:33 am
by Marth85
FATALES wrote: Thu Apr 25, 2019 7:49 am Mega super work. A magnificent project and idea.
Click and point adventure. It's gonna be great when it's all done.
I found an Anal tease and one tease in mobile.

I also tried to make an adventure in nyx : https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=37018
I didn't finish it
Thanks for the feedback. It requires a lot more work to be completed just wanted to get a taste of what people think of the project. I already spent a lot of time on it as it is. All mechanics are implemented just need to write the various sections. Unfortunately writing doesn't come naturally for me so it takes time. I have a lot of things planned for the tease but doesn't seem to be picking up much interest in the overall picture ^^ Will see how it goes.

I loved your work on the gladiator and really appreciate the feedback. The Nyx stuff looks really good, I don't think there is anything similar available in EOS.

Re: The Slut Within

Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2019 10:13 am
by FATALES
Marth85 wrote: Thu Apr 25, 2019 9:33 am
FATALES wrote: Thu Apr 25, 2019 7:49 am Mega super work. A magnificent project and idea.
Click and point adventure. It's gonna be great when it's all done.
I found an Anal tease and one tease in mobile.

I also tried to make an adventure in nyx : https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=37018
I didn't finish it
Thanks for the feedback. It requires a lot more work to be completed just wanted to get a taste of what people think of the project. I already spent a lot of time on it as it is. All mechanics are implemented just need to write the various sections. Unfortunately writing doesn't come naturally for me so it takes time. I have a lot of things planned for the tease but doesn't seem to be picking up much interest in the overall picture ^^ Will see how it goes.

I loved your work on the gladiator and really appreciate the feedback. The Nyx stuff looks really good, I don't think there is anything similar available in EOS.
I'm glad you liked gladiator. Don't let yourself be disgusted, especially when you've done some work on it.
EOS is the best. He opened the door to endless possibilities.

Re: The Slut Within

Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2019 9:13 pm
by timoth31
Just looked without actually doing it, I think I'm going to come back when I have time this just looks amazing! I'm not into it, but I saw there was an escort job for girls, when the rest is done you could implement sissyfication. And for the other jobs, it looks like there are a lot of possibilities, you should take a look on F95Zone there are game (rpg like) that could help you in the writing

Re: The Slut Within

Posted: Fri Apr 26, 2019 1:03 pm
by setarkos
Hi,
It looks like it's be really cool if you flesh it out.
Feedback:
1) Depending on how much content you are planning to put it the hard anal tease that you can get right away seems quite long.
2) During the teases the text just keeps on accumulating and I have to scroll down to see new lines as opposed to just clicking or hitting space.
I hope you keep working on it.

Re: The Slut Within

Posted: Fri Apr 26, 2019 1:24 pm
by Marth85
Thanks for the feedback and for playing the game. I will continue working on it to release regular updates.

Ideally the game would contain the stories in the current pool (5-10 scenes for each of the 6 stories), 5 milovana teases to help increase each skill (anal, sucking, stroking & cbt ) and the chaturbate system (endless play-through of randomly generated teases based on in-game skill).

I promised myself that if the tease would reach 4+ in rating I would develop the main story and the chaturbate system.

It's an ambitious project and I could use some help with the scene story writing as English is my 3rd language. If anyone is interested please message me.

Re: The Slut Within

Posted: Sat Apr 27, 2019 12:02 pm
by sparkyjo
Great Idea,
I like it a lot.
I'm not sure if it's a bug but the milovana hard anal tease seems to hang at the first pic with the girl with the black plug.
I have tried google chrome and MS edge and both just hang.
or is it just unfinished?

Re: The Slut Within

Posted: Sat Apr 27, 2019 3:03 pm
by Marth85
sparkyjo wrote: Sat Apr 27, 2019 12:02 pm Great Idea,
I like it a lot.
I'm not sure if it's a bug but the milovana hard anal tease seems to hang at the first pic with the girl with the black plug.
I have tried google chrome and MS edge and both just hang.
or is it just unfinished?
Thanks for reporting it. It should all work fine I will test it again. If you can, please post a screenshot with the console logs press F12 and go to the console tab there should be some red text to help me debug. Open the console before you get to the point where it get stuck otherwise it wont capture the error messages.

p.s. there are some sections with the metronome that do not have any visual feedback and you should just follow the beats. maybe I should display the timer.

Re: The Slut Within

Posted: Sat Apr 27, 2019 4:24 pm
by sparkyjo
I found out what it was.
The text had disappeared of the bottom of the screen and was asking for input from me.
so it still has a bug but not what I first reported.

Re: The Slut Within

Posted: Sat Apr 27, 2019 11:24 pm
by Marth85
sparkyjo wrote: Sat Apr 27, 2019 4:24 pm I found out what it was.
The text had disappeared of the bottom of the screen and was asking for input from me.
so it still has a bug but not what I first reported.
Yeah unfortunately that's an EOS thing. I might report it to @seraph0x

Re: The Slut Within

Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2019 1:23 pm
by setarkos
This doesn't seem to be an issue in other teases though.

It seems to only happen when the picture changes or a timer runs out. It seems like normally in those cases the text is cleared and the new line of text is on the top but within the anal teases in your tease the entire text stays from the very beginning.

Re: The Slut Within

Posted: Mon Apr 29, 2019 11:09 am
by Jexz
Hey

Just noticed a possible "Bug" or might be just incomplete part :P

Done 2 aspects with the messages and first part with girlfriend and went to work, said "too horny" fair enough but then won't load anything further other than blank text / screen

Refreshed screen and chose no to carry on with character and same blank screen.