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Hey gang. I'm looking for some feedback as I work up my next tease. In EXACTLY, http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=88 I had the absolute intention of allowing a clean orgasm, but not unless the teasee followed all of the instructions. I'm trying to play more with edging and delayed orgasm than pain and or humiliation. My general thinking is that the writing on each page should be short, to the point, and never more than one instruction per page. I'd rather repeat a pic, than have multiple instructions, as the "what's next" is a big part of the tease nd delay for me.

part of the problem, for all of us writing teases, is that many of the freebee pic sites have a max of about 12-15 pics of a particular woman in the same series, so our build is limited to that. I do love the "go visit my girlfriend" fix for that, and will play that way in my writing to overccome the pic limit.

How many of us like it as a delay / edge experience like i do I wonder?
If anyone has a way for me to find large sets, 30 or more pics, point me at it so i can build out a longer, quick moving tease.

zenlover wrote:My general thinking is that the writing on each page should be short, to the point, and never more than one instruction per page. I'd rather repeat a pic, than have multiple instructions, as the "what's next" is a big part of the tease nd delay for me.

I support this idea very much! Getting an instuction from a single picture to stroke 500 time, for 5 minutes or 5 edges just dont work - my attention span is far too short to do that. (After being teased for some time I am willing to perform a bit more for each picture - but the general rule is the faster the tease evolves, the better)

This is one of the things you do very well in "If you do EXACTLY...", however using 3 pictures for the string instructions, maybe a bit extreme - you could do that with just one pivture, and get two more pictures to use... (Oops, just checked - you reused the picture, nicely done)

Overall - "If you do EXACTLY...", is a really great tease (rated 4.0 says that) - but if it were twice as long it would be fantastic.

zenlover wrote: part of the problem, for all of us writing teases, is that many of the freebee pic sites have a max of about 12-15 pics of a particular woman in the same series, so our build is limited to that. I do love the "go visit my girlfriend" fix for that, and will play that way in my writing to overccome the pic limit.

The "girlfriend-fix" is a hack for not having large enough series - and it can be a bit confusing - but when done right you hardly notice it. "The Ladies of Leisure" had many changes of the teaser, but most of them are written so nicely into the tease, you dont think a second time about them - another fix is to use a different serie with the same model, i.e. "Go into living room, close you eyes and do 20 slow strokes, while I change into something more comfortable"

zenlover wrote: How many of us like it as a delay / edge experience like i do I wonder?

All the teases are just a delay... The denial ones just delay it at bit longer

zenlover wrote: If anyone has a way for me to find large sets, 30 or more pics, point me at it so i can build out a longer, quick moving tease.

I dont know any legal way to do this - Maybe some sites would be willing to give low resolution pictures with logo to use at Milovana (Could be a great advert) - But that is probably a far-fetched idea right now...
So for now the best option might be the "girlfriend-fix" - but if that is what you need to make longer teases, please use it. Try to write the change of girl into the tease in the most natual way you can, and reuse some pictures now and then - If it isnt a repeat but a picture from 2 or 10 pages ago, it might not be noticed....