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Hi all,

Just posted my first tease and I'd like some feedback. Let me know what you think or if you have ideas for improvement. Ideas for follow-up teases would be good too. Thanks

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=2735

Great tease! Try to avoid spelling mistakes if possible...

Thanks for taking the time to build a tease and share it with the group. It was great to see someone else using that metronome!

Some ideas for a follow-up tease:

Jenny is bad again, and Cassandra invites you back. This time she uses the clothespins on you and makes you assume a variety of positions as well.

Jenny is bad again, and Cassandra invites you back. This time Cassandra uses a strapon on you while you watch Jenny get punished by some guy.

Jenny is out of town for a few days, so Cassandra invites you over to fill in as the maid.

Cassandra invites you over to watch as she interviews some new "maids"

Thanks for the feedback.

I will check on the spelling mistakes. I did use a word processor...hopefully it's not too bad.



Thanks for the ideas for follow-up stories.

GREAT Tease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wasn't able to complete without, you know, but what a tease! I have tried again the next day and was able to reward myself for getting further. Great tease ...

Great tease one of my all time favourites Keep up the good work.