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Petrelli wrote: Mon Oct 22, 2018 8:04 pm Hi! im sure that you commited some mistake, because after the fight with the wolf and the blonde girl, the tease ends. If that is the end, its a very short tease, if not, im sure it will be a very good tease ;) Thanks for make this kind of adventurous teases.

Sorry if I have some grammar mistake, english isnt my first language.

Longplay1 wrote: Mon Oct 22, 2018 8:34 pm Thank you a lot you were right! No wonder it has so low rating. I can promise that the story is much, much longer. I fixed it but not sure how long it takes before it update the tease.

rabbithole wrote: Mon Oct 22, 2018 9:50 pm Hi there, I just ran through this tease. Got through the fight with the wolf, no problem, got back home, etc. But then on the page where someone says "You are not going anywhere!!!" the continue button doesn't seem to be working. Other than that, great job so far!

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I got to the angel ending and the game restarted after the "pleasures of heaven" line. FYI.

Tury wrote: Wed Oct 24, 2018 7:17 am

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I got to the angel ending and the game restarted after the "pleasures of heaven" line. FYI.

Tury wrote: Wed Oct 24, 2018 7:17 am

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I got to the angel ending and the game restarted after the "pleasures of heaven" line. FYI.

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Also, you cannot keep the queens life at 100 one of the right button is not working.
And at the end in the secret passage when you select the angel and you want to go back, it goes back to the start.

Ghingis wrote: Wed Oct 24, 2018 9:30 am

Tury wrote: Wed Oct 24, 2018 7:17 am

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I got to the angel ending and the game restarted after the "pleasures of heaven" line. FYI.

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Also, you cannot keep the queens life at 100 one of the right button is not working.
And at the end in the secret passage when you select the angel and you want to go back, it goes back to the start.

1. The first button on page152 has no target; page150 would be a suitable one.
2. The last button on page178 also has no target; it should be a "hit."
3. kpage203 redirects to the start, instead of to page300 as expected.
4. None of the buttons on page369 have targets. This means that if you block all attacks from the gladiator, and miss all your attacks, the game effectively soft-locks and you cannot advance.

rabbithole wrote: Fri Oct 26, 2018 6:36 am Hey, first of all I want to say great work on this tease. I can tell that there was a lot of thought put into all the elements of the "adventure game." My only suggestion would be to make better use of the code system. As far as I can tell, there is currently only one code that can be used. Why not give the player a new code whenever they reach a turning point in the story? That way we could exit the tease at any point and come back to where we left off.

Also, I've encountered a few stubborn bugs. There may very well be more, but here's what I've found so far:

1. The first button on page152 has no target; page150 would be a suitable one.
2. The last button on page178 also has no target; it should be a "hit."
3. kpage203 redirects to the start, instead of to page300 as expected.
4. None of the buttons on page369 have targets. This means that if you block all attacks from the gladiator, and miss all your attacks, the game effectively soft-locks and you cannot advance.

As a side note, why is it that you can still deal a killing blow even when you have 0 endurance left? This seems counterintuitive to me. At first I thought it was a bug, but given that this is consistently true, I realize now it was probably your intention.