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Re: Totally fucked
Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 11:42 pm
by cumhardy
Made me....breathless...

was so arousing. Tickling is my most feared or tortures. Worse than any pain!
Plus the part about feeling how tight you are from the dildo... oh my god!

Re: Totally fucked
Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 11:56 pm
by HogtiedCowboy
Thank you for sharing that Princess. It was quite the arousing story. I do believe ill be lying awake thinking about how you just fucked me.
HogtiedCowboy
Re: Totally fucked
Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 2:01 am
by Xenophobe
Something like that has been a fantasy of mine for a while now... Thanks for sharing!
Re: Totally fucked
Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 3:25 am
by besweetlycruel
Wow, what a pretty woman, what a devilish mind. Delicious combo, and a sweet twist.
Re: Totally fucked
Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 4:11 am
by z_k
Wow, just... wow.
Re: Totally fucked
Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 5:04 am
by retrotie
Sounds like heaven
Re: Totally fucked
Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 6:23 am
by denied hubby
oh mistress i'm like putty in your hands willing to do anything for you begging you writhing and bucking under your touch
Re: Totally fucked
Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 11:10 am
by Mz_Teneale
Loved it, i love your style of writing christie. For some constructive criticism though, i thought the end was a little rushed - when you started to fuck the cock gag. I dont know if that was deliberate or not. Also halfway through you stopped using paragraphs and the words were all bunched together. I found that harder to read.
Otherwise, it was awesome. Loved the story and loved the delivery.

Re: Totally fucked
Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:42 pm
by SilentRain
A nice story indeed. I liked how it was written maybe, as Miss T suggested; it's a bit messy on the last part but in any case it was a great story. Thanks a lot!