Feedback: Remy's New Toy
Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2018 2:03 pm
Share your thoughts on the tease/story and any changes that might need to be made.
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Re: Feedback: Remy's New Toy
Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2018 9:35 pm
Where can I find a woman like that?
Re: Feedback: Remy's New Toy
Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2018 11:12 am
I loved the scenario, but it ended just when the fun was gonna begin. I want to read about what he is gonna feel the next few days/weeks. And you told us to try and follow along, nothing really happens that is followanble. Still love the scenario, very hot.
Re: Feedback: Remy's New Toy
Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2018 5:08 pm
Phenomenal story! The moment when the story flips was super hot. I hope there’s a follow up or sequel!
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2018 10:51 pm
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Re: Feedback: Remy's New Toy
Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2018 4:04 am
Love the scenario and writing. Immediately the writing style reminded me of "Singularity" which is one of my favorite story teases, and surprise surprise, you're the same author! Love your stuff, thanks for making this.