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Malena's Maze of Edging

Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2018 1:25 am
by magilacuddy17
Hi all, this is my first tease.

Please report any bugs and I'll fix them.

Re: Malena's Maze of Edging

Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2018 1:58 am
by kerkersklave
I've found the following issues:

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g4s10#page(text:'<TEXTFORMAT LEADING="2"><P ALIGN="CENTER"><FONT FACE="FontSans" SIZE="18" COLOR="#FFFFFF" LETTERSPACING="0" KERNING="0">Now back to stroking. 2 strokes per second.</FONT></P></TEXTFORMAT><TEXTFORMAT LEADING="2"><P ALIGN="CENTER"><FONT FACE="FontSans" SIZE="18" COLOR="#FFFFFF" LETTERSPACING="0" KERNING="0">Do you like my ass?</FONT></P></TEXTFORMAT>',media:pic(id:"g4-10.jpg"),action:delay(time:20sec,target:g4s11#).hidden:sound('120bpm.mp3'))
  • The . before hidden should be a ,
  • Sound should be declared like this: sound(id:'120bpm.mp3')
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g5s12#()
This should be page() and it probably should not be empty.

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r15#page(text:'',media:pic(id:"room15.jpg"),action:buttons(target0:porch#,cap0:"North",target1:g4start#,cap1:"East",target2:r11#,cap2:"South",target3:r8#,cap3:"West"))
The page porch# does not exist.

Re: Malena's Maze of Edging

Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2018 2:26 am
by magilacuddy17
kerkersklave wrote: Sat Feb 24, 2018 1:58 am I've found the following issues:

Line 342:

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g4s10#page(text:'<TEXTFORMAT LEADING="2"><P ALIGN="CENTER"><FONT FACE="FontSans" SIZE="18" COLOR="#FFFFFF" LETTERSPACING="0" KERNING="0">Now back to stroking. 2 strokes per second.</FONT></P></TEXTFORMAT><TEXTFORMAT LEADING="2"><P ALIGN="CENTER"><FONT FACE="FontSans" SIZE="18" COLOR="#FFFFFF" LETTERSPACING="0" KERNING="0">Do you like my ass?</FONT></P></TEXTFORMAT>',media:pic(id:"g4-10.jpg"),action:delay(time:20sec,target:g4s11#).hidden:sound('120bpm.mp3'))
  • The . before hidden should be a ,
  • Sound should be declared like this: sound(id:'120bpm.mp3')
Line 359:

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g5s12#()
This should be page() and it probably should not be empty.

Line 128:

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r15#page(text:'',media:pic(id:"room15.jpg"),action:buttons(target0:porch#,cap0:"North",target1:g4start#,cap1:"East",target2:r11#,cap2:"South",target3:r8#,cap3:"West"))
The page porch# does not exist.
Thanks, I fixed them.

Re: Malena's Maze of Edging

Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2018 1:58 pm
by Mr.styr
Looks very intresting! :love: Did u plan HD version for GuideMe?

Re: Malena's Maze of Edging

Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2018 7:11 pm
by milorrabo
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There's a bug at the end, it gets frozen if you choose option A

Re: Malena's Maze of Edging

Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2018 7:04 am
by reddestiny
I completed 80% of the map.
Some MP3 files are error.(15, 20, 160, 300bpm)

and
Audio, Delay is missing on page m3s2.(A option)

Re: Malena's Maze of Edging

Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2018 11:22 pm
by kerkersklave
Also the following pages are not reachable:
o1b, g6fail2, g31s10

Re: Malena's Maze of Edging

Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2018 11:47 pm
by milorrabo
Are you planning on releasing a Map? I really want to check what I've missed :-)
Please :innocent:

Re: Malena's Maze of Edging

Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2018 10:38 am
by itslate
I would really like a map as well. I've been trying to map it, but it's not that easy, unfortunately :-)

I can't seem to find the pool area.

Re: Malena's Maze of Edging

Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2018 3:50 pm
by reddestiny
I tried to draw a map.

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https://s13.postimg.org/apk8z55k7/Malena_s_Mo_E.jpg

Re: Malena's Maze of Edging

Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2018 2:45 pm
by Zedd8888
Great tease!!!!!

A downloadable TeaseMe would be phantastic!! :blush: :innocent:

Regards,
Zedd

Re: Malena's Maze of Edging

Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2018 6:25 am
by Yargh100
reddestiny wrote: Mon Feb 26, 2018 3:50 pm I tried to draw a map.

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https://s13.postimg.org/apk8z55k7/Malena_s_Mo_E.jpg
Thank you very much for this, I found everything else but could not for the life of me find malena

too close too many times

Re: Malena's Maze of Edging

Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2018 6:32 pm
by dousque
Great Tease!

Re: Malena's Maze of Edging

Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2018 2:19 am
by reppi1292
Wow, great tease! This may be my new favorite for the time being!

Only technical issues I had were a few "stroke # times per second slides" that didn't have a functioning metronome beat.

Great pacing, great choice of girls, and great way to end it. 10/10

Re: Malena's Maze of Edging

Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2018 2:27 am
by catinthetree
Great tease! I am honestly still working my way through it (think I'm almost there). I enjoy that it is not too difficult to work your way through it, but that it takes quite a while to map it out and to track all the relevant info. As someone into both edging and chastity, it has been enjoyable to tell myself that I can't finish until Malena, such that I have thought about this tease over the course of 3 days nows (and subsequently have not finished).

In short, great work. Please continue creating!