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Just a normal school
Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2018 12:22 am
by Longplay1
Please tell me your opinion on my new flash-tease. I hope everything is working :)
Re: Just a normal school
Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2018 1:19 am
by tckt78
I like it. Not sure why the rating is so low right off the bat, as you have a beat meter going in the first couple of slides. I do find the story progression to be on the slow side. It is long enough that being able to jump to a part would be good. I'm looking forward to running it to the end soon (ran out of time on my initial walk thru)
Re: Just a normal school
Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2018 9:27 am
by Longplay1
tckt78 wrote: Fri Feb 16, 2018 1:19 am
I like it. Not sure why the rating is so low right off the bat, as you have a beat meter going in the first couple of slides. I do find the story progression to be on the slow side. It is long enough that being able to jump to a part would be good. I'm looking forward to running it to the end soon (ran out of time on my initial walk thru)
I'm glad you liked it. Not sure why the rating is so low either. That's why i need to find out what ppl didn't like about it.
Re: Just a normal school
Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2018 1:54 pm
by Jakubko
I like it too, very good play!
Re: Just a normal school
Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2018 2:35 pm
by lestrian
hey, i haven't tried it yet but i downloaded it through teaseme and there appears to be a bug with page431 not existing. in the downloaded xml file, the code for page431 is contained within the code for page430 so i could restore it. it might still work in the flash viewer, i have no idea
Re: Just a normal school
Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2018 10:30 pm
by scarlett
it says part two... can you link part one since Milovana no longer lets us just click your name to get all the teases you made. (fix that)
Re: Just a normal school
Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2018 10:37 pm
by Longplay1
scarlett wrote: Fri Feb 16, 2018 10:30 pm
it says part two... can you link part one since Milovana no longer lets us just click your name to get all the teases you made. (fix that)
You mean this one
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=36472 ?
Re: Just a normal school
Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2018 10:47 pm
by Longplay1
lestrian wrote: Fri Feb 16, 2018 2:35 pm
hey, i haven't tried it yet but i downloaded it through teaseme and there appears to be a bug with page431 not existing. in the downloaded xml file, the code for page431 is contained within the code for page430 so i could restore it. it might still work in the flash viewer, i have no idea
I know there was a special program for downloading teases from the webside not just through teaseme. Some teases may cause some problems when downloaded with just teaseme.
I downloaded it through teaseme program and at the end it wrote that there are some errors so i wouldnt reccomend do the same.
Try this
viewtopic.php?f=2&t=12944&start=780#p225772
Re: Just a normal school
Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2018 1:27 am
by lestrian
there was just one error and i could fix it. i just wanted to give you a heads up that there might be a bug in the flashtease and to check it out
Re: Just a normal school
Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2018 4:19 am
by ekralathugu
I backed out of this tease immediately because the "middle schools" graphic implied to me there could be underage content. If you're wondering why this tease has low ratings, that could be part of the problem.
Re: Just a normal school
Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2018 8:29 am
by FATALES
ekralathugu wrote: Sat Feb 17, 2018 4:19 am
I backed out of this tease immediately because the "middle schools" graphic implied to me there could be underage content. If you're wondering why this tease has low ratings, that could be part of the problem.
The theme of the middle school has nothing to do with the evaluation.
Tease on this topic is more ... bullying and and have a high rating.
Bullied Nerdy-Girl
Bullied Nerdy-Boy
Lose Yourself in Lust (Part 1)
Re: Just a normal school
Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2018 9:44 pm
by Liquidorus
Hey,
played the Webtease several times.
Here my review:
Positive:
- Very good choice of female actors, I enjoyed exploring every path of the game
- Metronome and moaning sounds very much appreciated! Love it
- Texts were mostly free of mistakes and easy to read
- Really loved the tries of the ladies making me cum ;) Tempting sometimes!
Negative:
- 30 seconds for each slide is a little bit long for about 70% of the images & texts
- Some overdrives were not timed with the slide (The metronome finished about 2-3 seconds before the timer ran out)
Overall I really enjoyed playing the tease! For your first Flashtease I salute you to your work.
Thank you! I'm looking forward to your upcoming work.
Re: Just a normal school
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2018 6:46 pm
by Longplay1
Liquidorus wrote: Mon Feb 19, 2018 9:44 pm
Hey,
played the Webtease several times.
Here my review:
Positive:
- Very good choice of female actors, I enjoyed exploring every path of the game
- Metronome and moaning sounds very much appreciated! Love it
- Texts were mostly free of mistakes and easy to read
- Really loved the tries of the ladies making me cum ;) Tempting sometimes!
Negative:
- 30 seconds for each slide is a little bit long for about 70% of the images & texts
- Some overdrives were not timed with the slide (The metronome finished about 2-3 seconds before the timer ran out)
Overall I really enjoyed playing the tease! For your first Flashtease I salute you to your work.
Thank you! I'm looking forward to your upcoming work.
Thank you for your opinion. I noticed about those overdrives but couldn't repair them all as i can see. I'm really glad you shared your negative notes. I will try to avoid these. Thanks for your support. I appreciate it.
Re: Just a normal school
Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2018 12:22 pm
by slavejack
Possible timer missing on page Riadpage191 ... girl on the elevator?
Re: Just a normal school
Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2018 12:08 pm
by slavejack
Another possible timer missing on page RIDEpage465 ?
Also one on page431?