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I’m not that much into food mess, but I did enjoy the read. You wrote it in a way which makes it easy and fun to read. Nice job.
I like that wife :))

You could call me a casual WAM-fan. Of the whopping two webteases I've posted, one features some light WAM, so there's no denying I'm kind of into it.

I remember, as a kid, watching one of those silly "dare" shows on TV. The episode had a girl squirt bottles of mustard onto a boy's head, and, for some reason, this triggered some stirrings in young me. In my early teen years, I'd fantasize about stuffing food down the girls' undies, and them doing the same to me. Did you have similar experiences?

As for your story -- it was great; thank you for sharing it! There was the right amount of build-up, but you didn't waste pages before getting to the action. You showed a good eye for where to include detail. The story never felt bogged down, but it wasn't hard to imagine the sexy parts. I was shocked (shocked!) at the appalling waste of food in the story, but that's a personal hang-up. Anyway, if you enjoyed writing, definitely continue!

YES I love how forbidden it is to play with food and make a truly enormous mess!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

#rulebreaker