Milovana.com

https://milovana.com/webteases/#author=99452

This is my first tease. I had a few ideas and this one seemed the easiest to start with. That is, until I made a little story to go along with it that took 78 pages. Regardless, i enjoyed the experience and learned how I may approach some aspects differently in the future. I also feel like I may have been a little repetitive and dragged things on a bit trying to add to the story.

Please let me know what you thought?
Any criticisms?
Did you enjoyed it?
Are you willing to sacrifice for that Beach Body?

Nicely written I think, but if I would lose 35lbs I would be anorexic

So not for me, well done though ^^

Pretty good! I like how unpredictable she was.

I'd probably be all for this. Though, if I DIDN'T make it, I'd have to break up with her. I might be freaky enough for everything else, but I don't go for cheating.

Thanks!

rockar15 wrote: Fri Jun 02, 2017 2:38 am I like how unpredictable she was.

Yup, need those crazy ones

Sam86 wrote: Fri Jun 02, 2017 1:58 am but if I would lose 35lbs I would be anorexic

I lost around that a year or so ago, but sadly did not have this encouragement

I'm not beach body ready