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Beach Body - Feedback

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https://milovana.com/webteases/#author=99452

This is my first tease. I had a few ideas and this one seemed the easiest to start with. That is, until I made a little story to go along with it that took 78 pages. Regardless, i enjoyed the experience and learned how I may approach some aspects differently in the future. I also feel like I may have been a little repetitive and dragged things on a bit trying to add to the story.

Please let me know what you thought?
Any criticisms?
Did you enjoyed it?
Are you willing to sacrifice for that Beach Body?
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Nicely written I think, but if I would lose 35lbs I would be anorexic :-D

So not for me, well done though ^^
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Pretty good! I like how unpredictable she was.
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I'd probably be all for this. Though, if I DIDN'T make it, I'd have to break up with her. I might be freaky enough for everything else, but I don't go for cheating.
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Thanks!
rockar15 wrote: Fri Jun 02, 2017 2:38 am I like how unpredictable she was.
Yup, need those crazy ones

Sam86 wrote: Fri Jun 02, 2017 1:58 am but if I would lose 35lbs I would be anorexic :-D
I lost around that a year or so ago, but sadly did not have this encouragement
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I'm not beach body ready :\'-(
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