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FB: Way to a dry orgasm
Posted: Sun May 28, 2017 11:21 pm
by Tury
I like what's going on here. I love the pacing, the models and the tasks so far. HOWEVER, the "Classic edition" ends abruptly at a page saying "I want 60 fast strokes! Now!" and the loose edition ends just as the model changes. I THINK you may have some design issues here or some thing keeping the tease from going all the way to completion.
Re: FB: Way to a dry orgasm
Posted: Mon May 29, 2017 1:34 am
by hhhobo
I found the same problems.
Re: FB: Way to a dry orgasm
Posted: Mon May 29, 2017 5:58 am
by jckplc7
I got some problems with nyx, but it should be fixed now ! thanks for your feedback
Re: FB: Way to a dry orgasm
Posted: Mon May 29, 2017 11:38 am
by Philze
First off what I really liked:
The Loser version where everything is blurred and you have to focus on feet. This is a nice idea Id like to see in other teases.
Besides the mentioned bugs I didnt like the speed of the slideshow, the simple question
- Spoiler: show
- Do you still have cum?
with the following
- Spoiler: show
- "dry" orgasm
This felt a bit rushed down from your side. But keep it up, you got the basics, practise it!
Thanks
Re: FB: Way to a dry orgasm
Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2017 4:22 am
by Leque33
I enjoyed it, but I found the slideshow portion a little repetitive. It took me a few tries to be "dry", so I would have appreciated more/different pictures. Other than that, well done!