hi, today i published my second tease, feedback would be appreciated ^^.
Also if you have any suggestions leave them here.
kurumi-sama kidnaps you
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Re: kurumi-sama kidnaps you
After I get to a certian point it loops back to the start.
After : " Did you like that ............. get soft again"
Hit Done. Tease restarts
After : " Did you like that ............. get soft again"
Hit Done. Tease restarts
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Im working on it right now, it should be fixed by now
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Fixed ^^ thanks for the helpgoodman854 wrote: ↑Sat Apr 15, 2017 6:52 pm After I get to a certian point it loops back to the start.
After : " Did you like that ............. get soft again"
Hit Done. Tease restarts
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Awesome tease! So glad people are making hentai teases again! Also did your original joip before it became a webtease, glad to see more hentai on that site too! Keep up the good work!
I did come across an error, seemed that the "cumming" button didn't work for me. Didn't redirect, just popped up an error. But I do use the html5 version on flashes tease (for mobile support).
Anyway thanks again, especially thankful for some of the more feet oriented pictures in this one ;)
I did come across an error, seemed that the "cumming" button didn't work for me. Didn't redirect, just popped up an error. But I do use the html5 version on flashes tease (for mobile support).
Anyway thanks again, especially thankful for some of the more feet oriented pictures in this one ;)
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footboy93 wrote: ↑Sun Apr 16, 2017 9:25 am Awesome tease! So glad people are making hentai teases again! Also did your original joip before it became a webtease, glad to see more hentai on that site too! Keep up the good work!
I did come across an error, seemed that the "cumming" button didn't work for me. Didn't redirect, just popped up an error. But I do use the html5 version on flashes tease (for mobile support).
Anyway thanks again, especially thankful for some of the more feet oriented pictures in this one ;)
Thanks ^^. I stopped posting on reddit becouse i had too many issues creating the imgur albums, I also think that the nyx
flash thingy works better than imgur albums, you can do more things with it.
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Re: kurumi-sama kidnaps you
Oh I see. I've never made a tease or a joip, but I know imgur albums can be frustrating. I think they're working on a new platform for joip. Anyway, please continue to make hentai teases, they've been great so far!
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I really like your works and I have a little feedback: I know it's probably intended for added frustration, but for me 30 seconds is a really long time as one step inside a tease, 1 minute is a lifetime and 2 minutes is more like going downstairs for a smoke and making it back So if you allow some ideas, maybe you can try boosting intensity instead of frustration by trying faster/shorter times for activities.
I suppose this is highly personal, my own favorite tease structures are strictly timed things (stroke x amount in y time or edge with a time limit) and if possible, having additionally a continue-button in case you're done earlier and want to move along (some slow teases can be manageable to intensity-fans if that button is available).
But you have such good ideas that I didn't lose interest where I usually would have when facing several 1-2 minute steps (or even repeated 30-seconds)
I suppose this is highly personal, my own favorite tease structures are strictly timed things (stroke x amount in y time or edge with a time limit) and if possible, having additionally a continue-button in case you're done earlier and want to move along (some slow teases can be manageable to intensity-fans if that button is available).
But you have such good ideas that I didn't lose interest where I usually would have when facing several 1-2 minute steps (or even repeated 30-seconds)
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Thank you ^^. I didn't know how to incorporate metronomes, i will use them in the next one to give more precise instructions.thatsprettyhot wrote: ↑Mon Apr 17, 2017 1:59 pm I really like your works and I have a little feedback: I know it's probably intended for added frustration, but for me 30 seconds is a really long time as one step inside a tease, 1 minute is a lifetime and 2 minutes is more like going downstairs for a smoke and making it back So if you allow some ideas, maybe you can try boosting intensity instead of frustration by trying faster/shorter times for activities.
I suppose this is highly personal, my own favorite tease structures are strictly timed things (stroke x amount in y time or edge with a time limit) and if possible, having additionally a continue-button in case you're done earlier and want to move along (some slow teases can be manageable to intensity-fans if that button is available).
But you have such good ideas that I didn't lose interest where I usually would have when facing several 1-2 minute steps (or even repeated 30-seconds)
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