Milovana.com

Here you can discuss, make notes, tell about pros and cons and the constructive critism.

Link to the tease:
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=31574

Hi Prometheus,

It looks like you've put a lot of work into this tease, and so I feel bad to see that its getting such low ratings. That said, I noticed a few things that I think may be contributing. First of all, it sounds like English is not your first language. There's nothing wrong with this, of course, but I found it very hard to follow exactly what the rules and requirements are for this tease. I suspect that that's particularly hard for a tease of this magnitude, but I would suggest asking another user to proof read at least the rules page for you. I would volunteer, but I'm over my head in work at the moment...

Also, I think that many users may find this tease to be very extreme. It does, after all, require a large time commitment every day, and many users may not have the time to commit to something of that magnitude. Personally, that's not a reason to give a tease a low rating, but I suspect that's why some people are.

Finally, your tease is extreme. Very extreme. Its probably meant to be that way. Excellent. There are some people for whom that is exactly what they want. However, many of the people who are willing to put up with one tease being in control for the better part of a year are likely to be the ones to go out and find a real life mistress to tease them. One of the biggest things that scared me off was the lack of comments on the frequency of orgasms and the lack of transparency in what this would do to my schedule really.

I have a few suggestions. First, I would, as I said above, ask another member to proof read the rules for you. Second, say up front how long the tease is. Thirdly, say up front how often victims have a chance to cum. Weekly? Monthly? One ruined orgasm in the whole tease?

And finally, just as an aside, a year without cumming is at best a very unrealistic punishment. Is someone who can't do this for a few months really all that likely to stick to a year without cumming? I suspect not, and so I would suggest making that punishment something a little more reasonable.

All in all, however, I like the concept and I thank you for putting so much work into the tease. It looks like a great start and I hope you can get it to its full potential.

Sincerely,
Ace