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Hi,

I would like to hear what people had to say about my tease, Join My Army.

I really feel like most teases on this site are way to long and way to complicated. I don't want to spend 3 hours on a tease sometimes and I was hoping to make something that was still fun but simple and quick.

Please let me know what you think

Full disclosure: I cheat on the vast majority (all?) of teases and have yet to craft one, so perhaps my advice isn't the best.

On thing that struck me is that it's hard to tell a consistent story with the pictures you used. I wasn't even sure if it was the same girl, and the backgrounds and outfits were completely different from page to page.

That being said, don't worry too much about the tease rating - I find it often reflects the length and "artsiness" of the tease, not necessarily how much people enjoyed it. For example, just because War and Peace is well-reviewed doesn't mean I want to curl up with it on a lazy Sunday afternoon.

Salerio,

I cheat on all of them too, thats why I was trying to do something that wouldn't need cheating. I understand about the pictures, just picked a hot girl on myspace so I didn't have a professional set.