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Carla - Schoolgirl tease
Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 11:36 pm
by slimdawgc
Hey everyone,
This is my first tease. Does anyone have any comments or suggestions for improvement?
Thank you.
great tease!
Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 2:30 am
by Crocko
i just made an accoubt here to post about how good your teases are!
Its really refreshing to see teases where the girl is being nice to the guy, and its a nice friendly tease! A really good treat and a break from the normal "wank for 5 mins then click next to see if you can cum" type things.
You allways pic really good looking girls, and the teases are well written, I voted 5 out of 5 for you mate, well done!
Keep up the good work!
Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 2:41 am
by TheGraduate
i like your newer The Party. please make more similar 'friendly' teases about a friend seducing you from your wife and all that. i love it
The Add on Potential
Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 1:12 pm
by nomeuno
This tease was ranked a five by me. i thought it was GREAT. Mainly because of how hot She is and the potential now, for Her to really take control. The readers cum is on her skirt. Imagine the school year this girl could have. If you are thinking of continuing with this series, it would and could be GREAT! Thank you for the tease.
Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 6:50 am
by cactusman
I agree with the others. I really liked 'The Party'. An excellent tease!
Thanks.
Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 7:43 am
by scubawlf
Hey, put me down for "The Party", also! Damn, she's hot!