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Hidden nipple tease

Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 1:20 am
by camipco
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Please only rate teases you have actually seen!

New tease, please enjoy.

I've noticed that when I'm browsing the teases, I like it when they have "tease" in the title. Call me easily stimulated.

I like back, feed me.

Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 9:05 am
by seraph0x
Great tease, love it! :smile:

I'm trying to think of something to criticize... For a tease I thought it was extremely liberal. Many of the instructions were very open to interpretation. On the other hand, that can also be a good thing.

Overall I thought it was awesome. The real art of webteasing lies in connecting the pictures to the text. And that was something you did really, really well.

Special props for actually having the courage to post a tease. :thumbsup:

On a sidenote, I think we need a
Spoiler: show
-tag so that when discussing details of a tease, people who haven't seen it yet won't accidentally read about the ending.

Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 9:54 pm
by dark
Yeah great tease. I dont know the end but the idea is nice. I ve didnt seen
all the parts but perhaps you could write a little more. Only a suggestion...

Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 1:27 am
by camipco
seraph0x wrote:For a tease I thought it was extremely liberal. Many of the instructions were very open to interpretation. On the other hand, that can also be a good thing.
Yeah, that's my general preference, see my general comments in the t&d forum. I feel it's more inclusive, since the reader can apply their own stroking style. Then again, having your habits challenged is part of the fun of t&d, so I guess there's a balance there.

And Dark, you're right, I didn't write lots of text for this one. I wanted to get something up on the site to help get things rolling. I'll write longer ones too, promise :-)

Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 10:45 am
by slavedave51
I didn't finish it because it started with a couple of pages of ball-thumping, which I don't really like, so I bailed early. Other than that, it looked good. I'll try it again and maybe ignore that instruction and then post more feedback.

dave

Re: Hidden nipple tease

Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 2:55 pm
by Canis
I've just tried this tease. I can only recommend it! Sexy girl (she actually reminded me of a girl I have a little crush on, which is even better), not too much text to read, the instructions are easy to handle and a good teaser! Like it.