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Wank to which outfit?
Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 9:29 am
by Carlcjjohnson
My first tease! You might recognise the model (Alexandra Sim-Wise) from that thread I started, wanting someone to put her in a tease.
Well, no one did that, so I took it upon myself. It took a while, all in all it's 43 pages, but it's constructed to be interactive so that you only do about half of them, making your own decisions along the way.
Enjoy it guys, but rate it too - I'd love some feedback!
Let me know what outfit you chose, and how it all ended
Thanks
Carl
Re: Wank to which outfit?
Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 7:35 pm
by SomeOne
I really enjoyed this tease, choosing french maid. But the video linked there (
http://www.megarotic.com/video/?v=85XK0VMT) seems not to be free to watch, or did i miss something?
regards,
SomeOne
Re: Wank to which outfit?
Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:54 pm
by ts
The video is free - you just have to give your (Or some legal) birthdate to watch it...
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ts
Re: Wank to which outfit?
Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 9:09 pm
by SomeOne
Hm. Next page after giving some birthdate is a page asking for a login (or signup for money)..
Re: Wank to which outfit?
Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 9:14 pm
by Carlcjjohnson
Wow, thanks for pointing that out. I've never had that problem, I can just watch it, no problem.
I'll edit it to a different vid. Try again soon! There are two other choices you can make! :D
Re: Wank to which outfit?
Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 9:32 pm
by Carlcjjohnson
Done.
Re: Wank to which outfit?
Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 10:05 pm
by eteased
Great tease. I chose the rather popular schoolgirl outfit.
I'm glad to see you took it upon yourself to create one, rather than waiting for someone else to do it for you. And nice work on coming up w/ the "Jerkogram" concept... it was entertaining and made for a good storyline for the tease.
Re: Wank to which outfit?
Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 10:36 pm
by Carlcjjohnson
Haha, I wish someone else would have put her in a tease so that I could enjoy it myself. But hey, it was a good starter for me.
There's still plenty of pictures of her out there if anyone's game
Re: Wank to which outfit?
Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 3:39 am
by cymerc
EXCELLENT tease!
Great pics (mmm, schoolgirl) and the language was great -- well written, and the 'tone' felt VERY realistic. You did a great job!
Re: Wank to which outfit?
Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 2:40 pm
by Carlcjjohnson
Wow, with feedback like this, I think I'll continue writing teases!
Re: Wank to which outfit?
Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 2:43 pm
by cymerc
Carlcjjohnson wrote:Wow, with feedback like this, I think I'll continue writing teases!
If you can understand the analogy, it was the first tease in a long while where I could hear one of my ex's voice as I read it.....the tone, mannerisms, everything was, a I said, very realistic to me. :)
Re: Wank to which outfit?
Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 3:38 pm
by Carlcjjohnson
cymerc wrote:Carlcjjohnson wrote:Wow, with feedback like this, I think I'll continue writing teases!
If you can understand the analogy, it was the first tease in a long while where I could hear one of my ex's voice as I read it.....the tone, mannerisms, everything was, a I said, very realistic to me. :)
Wow, you should help me write my next one! If you've any ideas or fantasies, PM them to me! It'll be a surprise for everyone else
Re: Wank to which outfit?
Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 12:55 pm
by andys_uk
I really liked this tease but, folks, beware as the link to the video dumps a few tracking cookies onto your system. I have NO thought that this is deliberate and I'm ceratinly NOT suggesting it is but it may be something to consider.
I'm pretty careful with my system and, with hindsight, I imeediately closed out the web and ran a check after I'd clicked the link. I'd only run a full scan about an hour earlier and had managed to pick up 9 tracking cookies. This can of course be rememdied by increasing security options but, for work reasons, my securtiy options are set lower.
Really great tease carlc... as the feedback shows. Just a suggestion but maybe youporn.com may be a better place to link to. Thanks again and sorry for the negative point but I thought it maybe worth pointing out.
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Re: Wank to which outfit?
Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 9:28 pm
by Carlcjjohnson
andys_uk wrote:I really liked this tease but, folks, beware as the link to the video dumps a few tracking cookies onto your system. I have NO thought that this is deliberate and I'm ceratinly NOT suggesting it is but it may be something to consider.
I'm pretty careful with my system and, with hindsight, I imeediately closed out the web and ran a check after I'd clicked the link. I'd only run a full scan about an hour earlier and had managed to pick up 9 tracking cookies. This can of course be rememdied by increasing security options but, for work reasons, my securtiy options are set lower.
Really great tease carlc... as the feedback shows. Just a suggestion but maybe youporn.com may be a better place to link to. Thanks again and sorry for the negative point but I thought it maybe worth pointing out.
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Shit, more problems with the videos! Lets face it, porn is littered with hiddedn problems that'll infect your computer later.
Sorry about that guys. I'll get onto changing it when I can (just not in a good position to be porn browsing right now
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Glad you've enjoyed it so! Keep voting and commenting and giving me feedback!
After all, a boost in my ego results in more teases from me for this community
