Hey guys! Just published my first tease, it's somewhat short, but I wanna know what you guys think of it. Next one will take into account any suggestion you all have and will be a lot longer :)
https://milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=32129
Also if you find any bugs do tell me <3
Your New Family 1 (FlashTease)
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Re: Your New Family 1 (FlashTease)
I liked it! 
No too long timers
No dead ends (i hate it when a mistake/failure to an order makes you restart from the beggining
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I enjoyed the incest theme (even if I'd be more on the "slave to mother-in-law" side of the things)
I liked how it ends
I don't see any big defect in your tease that will not be related to my strictly personal tastes, so I'm already looking forward to the next one
Good work!
EDIT: One thing I'd add would be metronome, but it's not a big lack
No too long timers
No dead ends (i hate it when a mistake/failure to an order makes you restart from the beggining
)I enjoyed the incest theme (even if I'd be more on the "slave to mother-in-law" side of the things)
I liked how it ends
I don't see any big defect in your tease that will not be related to my strictly personal tastes, so I'm already looking forward to the next one
Good work!EDIT: One thing I'd add would be metronome, but it's not a big lack
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Re: Your New Family 1 (FlashTease)
I too liked it. I enjoyed the teasing, the humiliation and the ending.
But it was too short. The daughter needs some sort of motivation. Is she doing this to blackmail you, is she just having fun, does she have some other reason to play with you and your cock? We saw too little of the wife I think. She seems to be dominant in the relationship, but we know very little of your relationship with her. It would be cool if she and her daughter partner up
Mostly I feel I just wanted to be teased for a longer amount of time. I want to feel like I'm my stepdaughter's toy and she's just playing with me.
Of course, all of my questions might be answered in part 2 I'm curious to see what you make of it!
But it was too short. The daughter needs some sort of motivation. Is she doing this to blackmail you, is she just having fun, does she have some other reason to play with you and your cock? We saw too little of the wife I think. She seems to be dominant in the relationship, but we know very little of your relationship with her. It would be cool if she and her daughter partner up
Mostly I feel I just wanted to be teased for a longer amount of time. I want to feel like I'm my stepdaughter's toy and she's just playing with me.Of course, all of my questions might be answered in part 2
I'm curious to see what you make of it!