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Hello Everyone, This is simply a teaser of my upcoming video. I am looking for feedback regarding, scene selection, editing, beat clarity, music selection. Any input no matter how simple or negative is welcome. I'm looking to make the best video I possibly can. It's only a teaser so i did not feel the need to make a torrent. Feel free to DM any suggestions or input if you dont want to comment them. Scene and song suggestions are also very welcome.

Thank you for your time it is much appreciated!!!!!

Looks good. My thought, even while watching the 4 minute trailer, is that the scene can get a little repetitive. I mean, I like a nice ass, but without mixing it up a bit with some teasing or other shots, it might get a bit old.

So what types of shots do you suggest incorporting? There is going to be actual fucking and blowjobs and what not in the full video what is posted is only the intro. I'm not 100 percent sure what you mean

Would like to see the rest.....Thanks...

[email protected] wrote:So what types of shots do you suggest incorporting? There is going to be actual fucking and blowjobs and what not in the full video what is posted is only the intro. I'm not 100 percent sure what you mean

For example, if ass is your theme then here's potential structure:

1 - Warm-up (softcore)
15 sec softcore break
2 - Interracial ass (hardcore)
15 sec softcore break
3 - Big ass (hardcore)
15 sec softcore break
3 - MILF ass (hardcore)
15 sec softcore break
4 - Big wet ass (hardcore)
15 sec softcore break
5 - Teen ass (hardcore)

As far as content goes, this is exactly what I'm into, so bravo for that. This seemed like maybe a round from the middle of the video. I'm a big fan of the start soft, finish hard formula. So like zenetix said, i would go something like:

Soft (dancing, generic ass shots, ass shaking, oil, etc
Female ass worship/play
BJ, In the crack action
Round primarily of ass shots riding cowgirl style
Round of primarily doggy
Anal

Something like that. But thats just me. I think the content you have looks good. I would change the font color for the beat directions, as sometimes it was hard to see. And it wasn't until about 1:40 or so in the the instructions matched the beat of the music well, which is important if you arent going to insert beats or a beat meter.

Can't wait for the finished product!

I'm an ass man, so I'm really looking forward to it! I liked the content in your teaser.

I have two suggestions for improvement, one minor and one major.

The minor point I would make is that if you use any non-stereo (mono) audio, please put it in both ears, not just one. I always wear headphones when I play Cock Hero, and hearing audio in just one ear can be jarring and a bit annoying. In your teaser, the only place that happens is near the beginning (00:13 - 00:20) when the brunette is talking. She has only a left channel. Even though it is mono, that audio should be duplicated in both the left and right channels.

The major point is that your teaser doesn't have an audible beat track. All good Cock Hero videos have some sound (a clap, or a wood block, or a distinguishable drum sound) that is not part of the original music and which occurs each and every time you intend for the player to stroke. Without that, it doesn't really matter what you might say in text cues on the screen, your intent is unclear and the video is unplayable as a game (although it can still be cool as a PMV).

Iono something I've been wanting and not finding a ton of in CH is double penetration. Seems to fit in with the ass theme so please include some, if not even a DP round =)

Personally i find it quite easy to distinguish the beat. I only choose songs with any simple 4 beat rhythm or something similar. I have been unable to find a beat sound that I liked to insert under the music. I realize most people do this, but its something ive never tried. Does anyone else have an opinion on whether its totally necessary or not.

1st THANK YOU SO MUCH being DYING for a ass themed cockhero !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2nd only suggestions i really have is maybe collecting a bit more clips and cutting them in a out a little more i feel like for most of them unless its a really hot clip should only be up for 2 measures of the song at a time at MOST
3rd i mean i can follow the beats shouldnt be hard but also i played drums a few years growing up
and probably lastly please make it a 1080 release =D other then that have fun with it man make it something you enjoy so you can enjoy making them people i dont think realize how much time and effort it takes to make one

[email protected] wrote:Personally i find it quite easy to distinguish the beat. I only choose songs with any simple 4 beat rhythm or something similar. I have been unable to find a beat sound that I liked to insert under the music. I realize most people do this, but its something ive never tried. Does anyone else have an opinion on whether its totally necessary or not.

It's not that it's that hard to find the beat in a 4/4 song, but if you show me the beat I can show you one twice as fast, or half as fast. If there is a distinguishable beat sound you use throughout the whole video, then the player doesn't need to think about it. He can focus on the action on screen better, knowing that if the intended/instructed beat changes, he'll be able to hear it. He can also jump ahead or back in the video and will instantly know what the intended beat is without having to wait for another text cue.

Others have made tutorials. There is a tutorial thread with a lot of great advice in it here. Cock Hero God and legend, Vindicare, tells how he does the beat audio layer in the first post of that thread, step 5. Modern master, Gern Blanston, gives his advice later in the same thread, here.

I hope you'll do it. I think adding an audio track specifically for beats to your project can make a mediocre Cock Hero a great one.

Bump for sergiok717 , just saw it on the newest tab.

http://www.xvideos.com/video14615935/co ... revolution

I found it on xvideos too. I didn't find the beats difficult to follow, but they weren't tough enough to make this a CH that you could fail. They were too predictable, mainly because they just followed the songs' beats, which are typical dubstep or something like that. I could guess where things were going to speed up and slow down. Same each round.

It's a shame, too, because the selections are damn good.

corpse wrote:Bump for sergiok717 , just saw it on the newest tab.

http://www.xvideos.com/video14615935/co ... revolution