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Greetings! As promised, I wrote a second part for "The Specimen" story, and it's called "The Asset". It's much less sexual, and is supposed to wrap up the story of the alien plant a bit. I'd say it's a bit less heavy and dark, although not completely light too, as the setting dictates certain degree of cruelty. I hope you still enjoy it .

p.s. This document features BOTH first and second parts, so if you didn't read "The Specimen" - it's here. There are no important changes to it, so if you already read it, feel safe to skip right to the second part, called "The Asset".

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzNw6e ... sp=sharing

Now available also on Literotica:
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-specimen-1

Just wanted to say that you did a great job. I felt it really did make for a great conclusion to the story, despite having a very different mood to the first part. I even see a little room for a spin off of sorts, with the last specimen. If one day you decide you do have more to tell, I certainly look forward to reading it

Razorsedge wrote:Just wanted to say that you did a great job. I felt it really did make for a great conclusion to the story, despite having a very different mood to the first part. I even see a little room for a spin off of sorts, with the last specimen. If one day you decide you do have more to tell, I certainly look forward to reading it

Thanks, I appreciate your comment.
The continuation of the story is unlikely though. I feel that Alice has been through enough already and deserved a peaceful rest.

Now, what I am most interested about is how bad my writing actually is. I want to write another story, a long one, and I want it to be actually written good enough so as not to cause more literate people to face palm a lot :)
I would appreciate any feedback on that.